XDF小兰 Part2-65，69，83 没人回，我就一直发新帖

yycome

65.Reared apart from each other, a recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.
(A) Reared apart from each other, a recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.
(B) Reared apart from each other, striking similarities between identical twins that include many idiosyncrasies of behavior were shown in a recent United States study.
(C) A recent United States study showed striking similarities in identical twins reared apart from each other that include many idiosyncrasies of behavior.
(D) According to a recent United States study, identical twins reared apart from each other showed striking similarities, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.（D）

(E) According to a recent United States study, identical twins showed striking similarities reared apart from each other, including many idiosyncrasies of behavior.

D项中我认为including many idiosyncrasies of behavior逻辑上应该修饰striking similarities，放在这里的话就应该表伴随修饰句子主语identical twins了么？我的理解哪里出错了？

69.Many investors base their choice between bonds and stocks on comparing bond yields to the dividends available on common stocks.
(A) between bonds and stocks on comparing bond yields to
(B) among bonds and stocks on comparisons of bond yields to
(C) between bonds and stocks on comparisons of bond yields with（C）
(D) among bonds and stocks on comparing bond yields and
(E) between bonds and stocks on comparing bond yields with

我的问题是E选项为什么不可以，上来看见comparison直接就把BC排除了

83.At the time of the Mexican agrarian revolution, the most radical faction, that of Zapata and his followers, proposed a return to communal ownership of land, to what had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards.
(A) land, to what had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards.
(B) land, a form of ownership of the pre-Columbians and respected by the Spaniards.
(C) land, respected by the Spaniards and a pre-Columbian form of ownership.
(D) land in which a pre-Columbian form of ownership was respected by the Spaniards.
(E) land that had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards.

答案是A，不明白A选项land后面的to what......到底做什么成分，当初看见B中的a form of......是个宾语同位语直接就选了

xinyu0717

including 是介词

yycome

还有点问题。。。
65题，我明白doing结构可以修饰主语或者整个句子，但是including many idiosyncrasies of behavior应该修饰striking similarities，可是striking similarities在D中是宾语，这我就不明白了，难道doing结构也可以就近修饰？

xuanyan

我试着回复一下吧，仅供参考哈~

65. D项中我认为including many idiosyncrasies of behavior逻辑上应该修饰striking similarities，放在这里的话就应该表伴随修饰句子主语identical twins了么？我的理解哪里出错了？

doing结构是可以修饰整个句子的，不一定遵守就近原则；而一般的V-ed/adj./adv./prep.短语结构就需要就近修饰了。

69.我的问题是E选项为什么不可以，上来看见comparison直接就把BC排除了

这个应该跟短语搭配有关，base sth on sth，在这个短语中on后面加名词比较好（个人意见哈，动词过多会使句子显得复杂），不是动词就一定优于名词的。

83.答案是A，不明白A选项land后面的to what......到底做什么成分，当初看见B中的a form of......是个宾语同位语直接就选了

to what是修饰return的宾语的，to what中的to与a return to中的to呼应，表示后面还是说的return to的内容，个人意见：what...就是讲的何谓communal。
a form of会就近修饰land，逻辑错误。

如有错误，见谅哈~~