OG106逻辑意思小问

ssxxtt27

B.Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone,a tool for private conversation,but which is precisely the opposite,a tool for communicating with a large,public audience.

C.Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone;instead,it has become precisely the opposite,a tool for communicating with a large,public audience.

C是正解 我的疑问是，B中，除了which 的错误外，逻辑意思上有什么问题？这两个选项把a tool和substitute的位置对调了。OG说B整句awkward
是不是B中a tool作为同位语放在那里引起歧义啊？
求指教~

ssxxtt27

B中a tool for private conversation做telephone的同位语没有歧义，但是逻辑上不合适，因为没有必要解释telephone 是一种tool for private conversation吧……

-- by 会员 bitieming (2011/8/15 10:32:58)

有道理啊 并且，which用法也不对，应该指代radio的，但是相隔太远，中间又有那么多名词干扰。。。

傻熊有傻福

同意LS的，B这里明显很awkward，很啰嗦，意思不简洁清楚，C明显better

bitieming

B中a tool for private conversation做telephone的同位语没有歧义，但是逻辑上不合适，因为没有必要解释telephone 是一种tool for private conversation吧……

ssxxtt27

自己顶~