求助一题。OG12TH,SC131

yevivictory

131. Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France
derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just
over 33 percent.
(A) while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
(B) compared to Germany, which uses just over
33 percent
(C) whereas nuclear power accounts for just over
33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
(D) whereas just over 33 percent of the energy
comes from nuclear power in Germany
(E) compared with the energy from nuclear power in
Germany, where it is just over 33 percent




我的疑问是，D错在哪里呢？！ OG的解析有点不理解。
在下先谢之。

少年时代balala

若雪 发表于 2011-6-6 02:24
131. Over 75 percent of the energy produced in Francederives from nuclear power, while in Germany ...

谢谢若雪！

fpd

但是，请问c答案是不平行的呀。第一句是percent做主语，而第二句是nuclear power做主语

-- by 会员 fpd (2012/11/26 12:09:05)

谁说要平行的？

-- by 会员 kiwifoodtown (2012/11/26 14:07:16)

whereas 不强求绝对句式平行 语义平行即可

-- by 会员 GMATEVA (2012/11/26 21:48:23)

accurate


good job


thx

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/11/26 21:55:37)

明白， thanks。

DUKB24

但是，请问c答案是不平行的呀。第一句是percent做主语，而第二句是nuclear power做主语

-- by 会员 fpd (2012/11/26 12:09:05)

谁说要平行的？

-- by 会员 kiwifoodtown (2012/11/26 14:07:16)

whereas 不强求绝对句式平行 语义平行即可

-- by 会员 GMATEVA (2012/11/26 21:48:23)

accurate


good job


thx

GMATEVA

但是，请问c答案是不平行的呀。第一句是percent做主语，而第二句是nuclear power做主语

-- by 会员 fpd (2012/11/26 12:09:05)

谁说要平行的？

-- by 会员 kiwifoodtown (2012/11/26 14:07:16)

whereas 不强求绝对句式平行 语义平行即可

kiwifoodtown

但是，请问c答案是不平行的呀。第一句是percent做主语，而第二句是nuclear power做主语

-- by 会员 fpd (2012/11/26 12:09:05)

谁说要平行的？

fpd

但是，请问c答案是不平行的呀。第一句是percent做主语，而第二句是nuclear power做主语

Siegfred

楼上高见! 谢谢!

若雪

131. Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France
derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just
over 33 percent.
(A) while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
(B) compared to Germany, which uses just over
33 percent
(C) whereas nuclear power accounts for just over
33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
(D) whereas just over 33 percent of the energy
comes from nuclear power in Germany
(E) compared with the energy from nuclear power in
Germany, where it is just over 33 percent




我的疑问是，D错在哪里呢？！ OG的解析有点不理解。
在下先谢之。

-- by 会员 yevivictory (2011/6/5 20:40:42)

D distort the meaning.


Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,  whereas nuclear power accounts for just over
33 percent of the energy produced in Germany.法国生产的能源中核能占75%，而核能在德国生产能源中占33%   这里energy虽然出现了两次，但是都是被限定的，一个是法国的一个是德国的，不会产生歧义。


Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, whereas just over 33 percent of the energy
comes from nuclear power in Germany
这个可以理解为 法国生产的能源中核能占75%，而在法国生产的能源中33%的能源来自德国生产的核能。这里因为后者energy没有被限定，所以会被误认为是前面说的那个energy。也就是说是energy produced in France. 这个和原意是不符的。



我觉得这道题CD的主要区别在于意思。在GMAT中状语修饰位置的不同是很容易产生歧义的，LZ可以试着理解看看~~