OG12——SC105

玩玩爱丽丝

105. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
麻烦各位帮我看看此题，解释一下意思，并且分析一下选项，谢了~~~

woodcash

[NO OBJECT] (capitalize on) Take the chance to gain advantage from:
an attempt by the opposition to capitalize on the government’s embarrassment

其实我对整句在说什么，尤其是capitalized on十分不解。匆忙之中就选了E。

醒醒Shine

这题我一开始错选了E，也是觉得自己还挺自信的。= = 唉，每次在论坛留言怎么都是破除我旧三观的题。
前辈们的总结已经很详细了，我只是正好想起白天复习CR的时候，有一个心得：
往往放到平时常见的句子里时，这题的问题就会一眼看穿了——
你平时造句的时候，会在主语人物和人物的行为直接愣愣插入一个介词短语吗？主谓宾定状补。平时总在强调的S要和V离得尽量近一些，其实还是这个意思。

这么一想，E根本应该就是一开始就会排除的答案。只不过这是考题，放在了一个我们不熟悉的语境里，难免答题的时候就陷进去了，只想着找各种语法规则去套。
越往后，错的越多，越明白什么叫终极大招是Meaning啊。T^T

在职人士熬夜复习GMAT，又做错题了。又长知识了！！

午夜精灵Ying

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
1）them 指代不对  参见A
2）使用and 将coordinated 和Capitalized 连接起来使作者想要表达的意思扭曲。

午夜精灵Ying

以下是本人综合了前辈的意见总结的，和各位分享~不对的还请指教
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

1)them can not refer to "book illustrations". in her book illustrations is in paranthesis and we should be able to remove the content of the subordinate clause without impacting the mail clause. However, "them" has no reference if in her illustrations is removed. The antecedent to a pronoun in the main clause of the sentence cannot occur only in phrase in paranthesis.
引自以下连接：
http://www.urch.com/forums/gmat-sentence-correction/98158-beatrix-potter-her-book-illustrations.html
2)A Moun and Its modifier should touch each other-摘自曼哈顿
carefully coordinating them with her narratives 中间有插入语无法直接修饰Beatrix Potter

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
carefully coordinating them with her narratives 夹心修饰，会有做book illustration的定语的可能。

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
Carefully coordinated 在逻辑意思上需要修饰book illustrations，但是在位置上却是修饰的
Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
Carefully coordinated 在逻辑意思上需要修饰book illustrations，但是在位置上却是修饰的
Beatrix Potter

MiaZhang

其实E也还好理解：按照E的意思，“BP，在他的illustration中将illustration与narrative相结合了”，逻辑意思显然是不通顺的。
除此之外，通常改变句子主从关系的选项都不怎么受待见，因为改变了原文原有的含义

vianfq

Mark, and come back to review later.

zwhjzwhj

其实说实在的，我看完了附件里的关于coordinating和sequence的解释了，
但我还是不是十分的明白啊
真的我真没理解，谁能用再大白话一点的词帮我解释解释OG的这个confuse the sequence of time

我之前考的时候和别人讨论过这个问题，里头的内容批判着看哈。
可能文档里有一些欢乐的语句，可以忽略。。。

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/12/1 17:24:10)

qiaowin88637

我之前考的时候和别人讨论过这个问题，里头的内容批判着看哈。
可能文档里有一些欢乐的语句，可以忽略。。。

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/12/1 17:24:10)

感谢bat，这个总结超级有用！

CCcarol

我之前考的时候和别人讨论过这个问题，里头的内容批判着看哈。
可能文档里有一些欢乐的语句，可以忽略。。。

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/12/1 17:24:10)

哇,Bat说的太有用了~~~感谢~~~