救助GWD-3-Q19 关于平行问题~~manhattan的解释很疑惑

小福仙儿

Possible long-term consequences of the “greenhouse effect,” the gradual warming of the Earth’s climate, may include melting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level.


A.      may include melting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level


B.       may include the melting of polar ice caps and the rising sea level


C.      may include polar ice caps that are melting and sea levels that are rising


D.      include melting the polar ice caps and sea levels that are rising


E.       include melting of the polar ice caps and a rise in sea level


问题1：看了许多讨论帖，我选的B,总结出
B选项 抛出may的原因不说 强调的重点在 polar ice caps and sea level  对不
而E选项前一个强调的重点是melting 我想问下那个melting做的是什么成分  
我觉得”前面强调的是过程ing，后面自然就是结果a rise，这是一个逻辑思路的问题。前面导致后面，并不是一起发生的，所以不能够用同样的句式“
这句话超有理对不
问题2：以下是他们的内容
WHY NOT B

he melting of polar ice caps and the rising sea level
Melting :- Gerund
Rising : Adjective.

E is parallel because ofÂ
melting of PIC :- Prepositional phrase
the rise in sea level :- Prepositional phrase.
完全晕菜~~什么介词短语啊？？？
下面的评论还给了个perfect。。。。
这是对的吗？如果对的，那个好心人儿能给我解释下~~~非常感谢~~
小女子先谢啦~~

今天也要加油鸭

pinkyhuayin 发表于 2012-1-12 12:27
看了你得解释，不过还有一点疑惑，曼哈顿不是说simple gerund 不能和action noun 平行，仅 复合动名词，the ...

我这里也有疑问.或者就是melting of the polar ice caps其实是complex gerund?不过曼哈顿上对于simple还是complex的判断不就是有没有冠词吗?

surrender

个人觉得melting of应看做complex gerund，去掉of才是simple gerund。

pinkyhuayin

看了你得解释，不过还有一点疑惑，曼哈顿不是说simple gerund 不能和action noun 平行，仅 复合动名词，the V-ing才可以平行么？

还是曼哈顿说的太绝对了，不正确呢。


Of the two types of gerund phrases, only complex ones can be parallel to action nouns.
In a list of action nouns, a simple gerund phrase might be mistaken for something other
than a noun.
Wrong: The rebels demanded the withdrawal of government forces from disputed
regions, significant reductions in overall troop levels, raising the rebel
flag on holidays, AND a general pardon.




Withdrawal reductions, and pardon are all action nouns. Thus, you should not include the
word raising by itself (it might be misinterpreted as a modifier). Rather, you should choose
THE raising OF.
Right: The rebels demanded the withdrawal of government forces from disputed
regions, significant redyctions in overall troop levels, THEraising OF
.the rebel flag on holidays, AND a general pardon.
In any list of action nouns, always choose the complex gerund phrase (often with articles
and the word Of) over the simple gerund phrase!



这样E选项是不是就有问题呢？ 要用 the melting 。。。and a rising 才平行。


请各位NN指点。

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