OG12-SC-112 求解~~

sullivan215

As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated
about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with
such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it
would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if
it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be
rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be
rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally
blind if an adult.
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be
rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision
would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which
would deemed legally blind for an adult, would
be rated about 20/500.

本题答案为D，小弟不解的是OG对于选项E的解释是："Subordinate clause beginning with which is awkward and ambiguous."which在这里真得很不妥吗？是什么原因呢？还请NN指点迷津~多谢呀！

浅浅123

这题我刚刚做过 which 就近修饰vision vision 带入定语从句  vision would  deemed legally blind for an adult.逻辑意思不合理

lei825

我觉得应该是限制和非限的问题，用了Which则表明此WHICH引导的此句无关紧要，可去掉，但这部分恰是重点要说明的，所以不能用which，要用that~

jiaying52

我觉得有歧义的原因是，瞎得对象不应该是sense of vision而应该是adult,而不是sense或者是vision,否则of短语不是都不能被which修饰，都有歧义了嘛
请指教！

OO335722076

我想问下这里的which 怎么能指代vision 和sense 呢      sense of vision 不是只能指代核心词sense 吗      
谢谢

machao924

你的回答是一个fragment sentence，应该拿去作为美国人考中国GMAT的考题。

sullivan215

真心楼上的解答~！
看来GMAT对句子前后位置的逻辑性要求就像编程一样严格，即使我们能读懂意思，但是每一句话的位置在这里都要斟酌...

machao924

我是这样理解的，OG说which指代不清楚是因为它可能指代vision或者sense，说它awkward是因为它引导的从句说它将使一个成人在法律上被看作盲人。但此时，这个which还没有被定义为rated about 50/200（后一句话才说明了这一点）。此外，句子中用的是deemed如果是动词，跟在would后面不应该加ed。如果是形容词，应该在其之前加上系动词be。D当中使用的是be deemed，很好地处理了这个问题。

sullivan215

自己先顶一下~NN出现吧~