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西瓜2011

Ranked among great mathematical scientists such as Archimedes, Kepler, and Newton, Abu Ali al-Hasan ibn al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as on philosophical arguments.

	al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as
	al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on experiment as well as
	al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and who experimented extensively with light and vision, thereby laid the foundation for modern optics and also for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also
	al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also
	al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimenting extensively with light and vision and laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion of science being based on experiment as well as 选E，求问D为什么不行呢？

2017

我觉得这个题目应该选B。E选项太过强调出生，作为整句的谓语。同时experimenting和laying做born的伴随，不合理。我不知道notion什么意思，但是觉得notion of ... being based很别扭。

西瓜2011

谢谢你帮我解答D，很清楚。3Q！！
我听老师讲过B和E，但他没有提到D所以我才问问老师说B选项太过强调出生。但其实我不太懂他什么意思。

sunxiaotong

“that should be” wordy？

2017

请问B怎么错法？
D选项：was born..., had experimented... experiment动作在born之前，不合理。