求救!!!!!! 几道语法题

xiangmingliu08

以下几题摘自白勇语法书上，看了解释之后还是不太明白，希望能人能够帮助我解答一下。
1.The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.

A. one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.
B. one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting.
C. one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, private colleges that increased their tuition costs, and recruiting improvements by the academies.
D. fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs increasing at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting.
E. fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting.


(A)
2. Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting will be reported in the July 15 issue of the computer paper.

A. Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting will be reported in the July 15 issue of the computer paper.
B. Promotions, retirements, and other actions which have been approved at the May meeting of the board of directors along with deaths, will be reported in the July 15 issue of the computer paper.
C. To be reported in the July 15 issue of the computer paper are the promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions which were approved at the board of directors’ May meeting.
D. meeting in May, the promotions, retirements, and other actions approved by the board of directors, including obituaries, will be reported in the July 15 issue of the computer paper.
E. The July 15 issue of the computer paper will report on promotions, retirements, and other actions approved by the board of directors at its May meeting; the paper will also include obituaries.


（E）
3. Very popular from 1900 until the 1920’s, the renewed interest in ceiling fans began when the energy crisis in 1974 forced homeowners to look for alternative methods of heating and cooling.
A. Very popular from 1900 until the 1920’s, the renewed interest in ceiling fans began
B. the renewed interest in ceiling fans, which were very popular from 1900 until the 1920’s began
C. After they were very popular from 1900 until the 1920’s, the renewed interest in ceiling fans was beginning
D. ceiling fans were very popular from 1900 until the 1920’s, with renewed interest beginning in them.
E. from 1900 until the 1920’s the ceiling fans were very popular, and now the renewed interest in them has began


(B)

Kb24

1
one fueled 里面one很重要，要保留，不然的话会理解为application fueled, 而句子强调的是rise。所以排除DE
ABC里面，A的结构明显平行：resurgence, costs, and recruiting...
BC的里面这几个短语明显都不平行，所以选A

2
楼上解释的蛮好啦，ABC排除，因为death怎么能被approved呢？只能是obituaries。 何况BC的结构比较乱。剩下DE
D的结构：meeting, promotion, retirements, and other actions, will be....里面连 meeting都被平行进去了变成了主语，明显错了.E正确

3.
A interest作为主语，不能'very popular'. popular的是fans, 不是interest.
B the renewed interest in the fans, which 就近指代fans, 整个结构是interest began when the ...in 1974...结构完整，时态正确。
C after they were... the interest ...明显主谓不一致，前半句想指的是fans,后半句变成了interest.错误和A类似
D fans were....with the renewed interest beginning in them... 非常awkward
E fans were popular, and now interest in them has begun when crisis in 1974....不但比较啰嗦而且时态错误。后面明确由时间标志，应该用过去时。and now也是多出来的扭曲了原文意思。

hope that helps, man!

zyzrafa

第二题我在逛论坛时看到了一个解释 觉得讲得蛮好的 希望能有帮助

     这道题目的难度比较大，考场中如果不能保持清醒的头脑，很有可能会把题目做错。题干的意思是提升，退休，死亡，和其他活动在五月份的董事会议上被批准了，这将会在7月15日的公司报章上有所报道。稍加分析我们就会发现问题，提升和退休可以被批准，死亡怎么能被批准呢，这明显属于词与词之间的逻辑关系搭配错误。答案应该选E，句子的最后另起了一个分句，这个文章也会包括死亡报告，消除了逻辑错误，而且用了obituaries是death的书面语，更符合商业英文的习惯。

xiangmingliu08

唉,自顶一下吧~~

xiangmingliu08

万分感谢！！！！