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翁羽凌虚

OG-SC里面的249
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whomdiffered significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

OG对E的解释是：In E, the construction different from that of his own is confusing since there is no referent for that. different from his own makes a logical comparison.我觉得that不是指代music么？

258.The British sociologist and activist Barbara Wootton once noted as a humorous example of income maldistribution that the elephant that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo was earning annually exactly what she then earned as director of adult education for London.

(A) that the elephant that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo was earning

(B) that the elephant, giving rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo, had been earning

(C) that there was an elephant giving rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo, and it earned

(D) the elephant that gave rides to children at theWhipsnade Zoo and was earning

       (E)the elephant giving rides to children at theWhipsnade Zoo and that it earning

其中对B的解释是：n B, the structure of noted... that the elephant, giving rides...,had been earning falsely implies that the reader already knows about the elephant- that is, that the existence of this particular elephant is not new information.是什么意思啊/
谢谢各位了。

rustraff

填入B:
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, (whose [repertory, views( on musical collaboration修饰views), and vocal style 定从主语 ] influenced{定从谓语} generations of bluegrass artists,) { also inspired 主句谓语} many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly  from his own.

翁羽凌虚

第一题 Bill Monroe  是句子的主语 influence and inspire 是他的动作
E的话 were和作为单数的主语不一致

第二题 这里要用过去时 那只有B中的 was earning符合了

其实第二题还是有点糊涂唉。。

-- by 会员 zyzrafa (2011/5/1 12:43:34)

哎 谢谢你啊 呵呵

zyzrafa

第一题 Bill Monroe  是句子的主语 influence and inspire 是他的动作
E的话 were和作为单数的主语不一致

第二题 这里要用过去时 那只有B中的 was earning符合了

其实第二题还是有点糊涂唉。。

随风奔跑

我一开始也纠结在A,B选项，后来觉得吧，这个大象赚的钱和她赚的钱是一个表达收入分配不均的例子，收入分配不均肯定是同时发生的两件事比较，所以时态要保持一致，后面是过去时（earned)，前面也应该是过去时，就把B排除了。

小唯唯

再顶……我发现以前的帖子大家都不爱理

-- by 会员 小唯唯 (2011/3/25 21:12:30)

是啊 我以前好多帖子都石沉大海了。。。。 GMAT复习起来真是很挫败啊  语法我那么久了 要有实质性提高很难啊 逻辑更不用说 我觉得最大的问题再语言上

-- by 会员 翁羽凌虚 (2011/3/26 21:28:48)

着实令人伤心……

翁羽凌虚

再顶……我发现以前的帖子大家都不爱理

-- by 会员 小唯唯 (2011/3/25 21:12:30)

是啊 我以前好多帖子都石沉大海了。。。。 GMAT复习起来真是很挫败啊  语法我那么久了 要有实质性提高很难啊 逻辑更不用说 我觉得最大的问题再语言上

小唯唯

再顶……我发现以前的帖子大家都不爱理

小唯唯

顶起

强娃娃

因为其他的选项不对吧。
作者只是恰巧选择了WAS EARNING 吧
等其他解释