求助~~OG12 SC 112

lss2010

As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a
rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about
20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a
rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about
20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its
rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500;
qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult.
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a
rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about
20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally
blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its
rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally
blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

全部划线。正确答案为D。

不解的是D中的that (would be rated)是什么成分呢？这里为什么要加that呢？十分地不解~~请大家帮忙分析一下！Thx！！

FactOrFiction

E里面的would deemed是个明显错误, 少了个be.

phoenixrocks

E选项除了awkard，还有哪些错阿？
OG上说主句以which 开头不正确，但是这儿的主句主语不是 its rudimentary sense of vision吗？然后which 修饰主句主语，接着谓语等等。我感觉好像对阿。e的中心好似在说rate，但也不能说它错呀。不解ing，请大家帮小女子分析下。多谢。

lss2010

that引导的是定语从句修饰vision，由于vision在从句中作主语所以that是不能省略的

-- by 会员 lhnstefsun (2011/1/7 18:36:18)

啊。。就是。。谢谢！之前理解错了，总之自己把自己弄糊涂了~~

lhnstefsun

that引导的是定语从句修饰vision，由于vision在从句中作主语所以that是不能省略的