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meckychen

184. Some people like to study alone, but the others prefer to study with groups. Which one do you prefer?

Which one do I prefer? Study alone, or study with groups? It’s very hard to make a decision. In my opinion, both are essential.

Admittedly, sometimes studying alone is more efficient, especially at the beginning of learning new knowledge since we have to concentrate on our study without disruption and try our best to understand the knowledge by reading related books or surfing on the Internet. At this time, discussion is meaningless since we do not know the knowledge any more. Any discussion may confuse us. Meanwhile such discussion is ineffective because some people or all the people may keep silent.



However, when we further our study, we may have different opinions. We can discuss to solve the problems. Through discussion, we can know the knowledge deeply since we exchange opinions during discussion. Such opinion may open our mind since every one is limited, we can not consider everything completely.



Meanwhile, in today’s world, at the age of knowledge explosion, we have to learn to study alone since there are fewer and fewer opportunities for us to discuss study. As adults, we are not like the students at schools who have more opportunities to discuss with their classmates or teachers since maybe we can not find the people who we can discuss with. Our friends or family members may have different jobs and we learn professional courses on Internet by ourselves. Even if we have problems, it’s also an effective way to find the solutions by ourselves by books or Internet. But, if we can find the suitable people to discuss, maybe at companies or at home, it’s also a better way for us to study.



In conclusion, studying alone and studying with groups are both crucial for us.
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望大家帮我修改一下。先谢谢了。