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请教 OG12-103 关于平行修饰的一点疑问~~~@@

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发表于 2010-11-10 17:31:40 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species
of the world’s social wasps, wasps living in a highly
cooperative and organized society where they consist
almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile
female workers.
(A) wasps living in a highly cooperative and
organized society where they consist almost
entirely of
(B) wasps that live in a highly cooperative and
organized society consisting almost entirely of
(C) which means they live in a highly cooperative
and organized society, almost all
(D) which means that their society is highly
cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
(E) living in a society that is highly cooperative,
organized, and it consists of almost all

本题选择B。
我对OG上的一段解释有点不明白:The three descriptors of social wasps (cooperative, organized, and consisting almost entirely of females) are most effectively expressed in parallel structures.
然后OG对B项的explaination是这样的:The three descriptors of the wasp society are in parallel form, and consisting properly modifies society.
请问这三个修饰语(cooperative, organized, and consisting)到底哪里是并列呢?
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发表于 2013-1-10 11:54:22 | 只看该作者
到底究竟为什么是三个平行结构呢?按我们的理解明明是两个嘛。。
37#
发表于 2012-4-9 20:15:18 | 只看该作者
同位语不仅是优先于which,还有很多其其他的情况,比如过去分词修饰会造成歧义什么的,比如说OG38 53题(不好意思懒得敲了,麻烦Jimmyzhang自己翻下书吧)
然后关于优先于which OG103就是很典型的一道 还有就是OG118  63(AB) 83
还有一道题我找不到了,很典型,是说在哪里发现一种物质,后面有finding同位了这种物质然后怎么样怎么样,忘记是OG上的还是prep上的了,真是不好意思啊

理论上来说为什么which不好是因为有时候主句很长,往往会包含很多的名词,这样就会造成which指代的模糊,所以同位语更好,只要逻辑上木有问题就是同位语啦~~我觉得GMAC超级偏爱同位语==
当然在选择同位语的时候还要看主句是不是有谓语的,比如OG104。
嗯,大概的就是这样吧,我的语法也不是很好,不过希望对你能有帮助
-- by 会员 joyous314 (2011/4/29 11:17:22)


顶出来吧,造福全人类。
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发表于 2012-2-1 13:13:43 | 只看该作者
(cooperative, organized, and consisting)

they all function as adj, modifying society
-- by 会员 eshopaholic (2010/11/18 21:50:42)


一语点醒梦中人
35#
发表于 2011-6-29 21:24:32 | 只看该作者
太厉害了,对OG的熟悉程度令人发指啊
34#
发表于 2011-5-22 18:14:26 | 只看该作者
恩恩找到啦哈哈
Scientists haveobserved large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twentycentimeters of Baltic Sea sediments,which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there.

A. Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrialactivity there
B. Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistentwith these findings
C. Baltic Sea sediments, finding consistent with its growth of industrialactivity
D. sediments from the Baltic Sea, finding consistent with the growth ofindustrial activity in the area
E. sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrialactivity there
答案选D,finding做large concentrations的同位语
-- by 会员 joyous314 (2011/5/10 8:25:14)



hmm 我见过这题 在蓝色的Verbal上 第一次我也做错
这里findings 做名词, 同位语, refers back to the scientists' observation, 是一个noun + adj 的独立主格结构
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发表于 2011-5-10 08:25:14 | 只看该作者
恩恩找到啦哈哈
Scientists haveobserved large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twentycentimeters of Baltic Sea sediments,which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there.

A. Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrialactivity there
B. Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistentwith these findings
C. Baltic Sea sediments, finding consistent with its growth of industrialactivity
D. sediments from the Baltic Sea, finding consistent with the growth ofindustrial activity in the area
E. sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrialactivity there
答案选D,finding做large concentrations的同位语
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发表于 2011-5-9 22:39:10 | 只看该作者


还有一道题我找不到了,很典型,是说在哪里发现一种物质,后面有finding同位了这种物质然后怎么样怎么样,忘记是OG上的还是prep上的了,真是不好意思啊
-- by 会员 joyous314 (2011/4/29 11:17:22)

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不知道你说的是不是 OG107 也是 a technique 同位前面的名词,再加定语从句进一步修饰。看来的确是一个常用的表达,也许写作里也可以用上

Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced X-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
-- by 会员 Jimmyzhang2012 (2011/5/4 1:20:08)


[/quote]恩..好像不是这道题,我明天到自习室的时候再找找,书木有带回宿舍啊,哈哈不好意思..前两天再看的时候好像又看到这道题了XD
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发表于 2011-5-4 01:20:08 | 只看该作者
[/quote]

还有一道题我找不到了,很典型,是说在哪里发现一种物质,后面有finding同位了这种物质然后怎么样怎么样,忘记是OG上的还是prep上的了,真是不好意思啊
-- by 会员 joyous314 (2011/4/29 11:17:22)

[/quote]

不知道你说的是不是 OG107 也是 a technique 同位前面的名词,再加定语从句进一步修饰。看来的确是一个常用的表达,也许写作里也可以用上

Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced X-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
30#
发表于 2011-5-4 01:13:02 | 只看该作者

修饰成分 - 同位语

谢谢joyous314的指点! 仔细看了你点的几道题目,觉得说的很有道理。自己也试着总结了一下同位语适合的情况:
1. 专有名词比如论文名之后,解释介绍这篇文章的情况. (OG38 53) 这种情况下优于分词短语是因为分词短语也可以修饰主句的主语从而造成歧义。
2. 类似于 a phenomenon that... 的结构. (OG118 OG83) 名词同位语替换主句中的名词结构,再用that定语从句加以修饰,简洁清晰。类似的有 an extraction rate that... (OG63)

自己还在一句一句的挖语法点,希望能早一串点成线。像这些都属于修饰成分的选择和使用。谢谢!
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