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天使追梦

She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to

B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to

C. Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in

D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to

E. She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in

答案C
C的结构中，似乎比较的二者不太对称呀？
after...和she had in...比？

ARG

非常感谢

qiuhua01234567

同意LS，一般平行里用的比较多，而对比里不要乱用，涉及到logic了

davidliuscu

She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.


OG里说A错的一个原因是"creat a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjuction."
可是这里明明可以理解为：句子1，句子2，and句子3嘛。。。——我这种说法怎么不对？

-- by 会员 天使追梦 (2010/9/23 0:17:27)

同一主语发出的一系列动作，可以用： 动作1， 动作2，and动作3这个结构；本文不存在这种情况

xihuanbinfen

请问，句子1，句子2，and句子3这种结构是错的吗？

kevin0214

nevertheless这里是副词吧，连词是连接句子的，只能是“句子A，连词+句子B”吧。
另外，小猪所说的E，即使是状语比较，E也不能选啊，逗号不能连接句子的。

robinwayne

跟楼上同问。因为这个nevertheless, 我选了E

xinxinhome

弱弱的问一下，nevertheless是表示转折吧，所以不能although一起出现？怎么判断是连词还是副词呢，看在句子中的位置？

0o小猪o0

怎么能是状语比较呢？如果是的话那E就也有可能了？

janeee

She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.


OG里说A错的一个原因是"creat a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjuction."
可是这里明明可以理解为：句子1，句子2，and句子3嘛。。。——我这种说法怎么不对？

-- by 会员 天使追梦 (2010/9/23 0:17:27)

没有见过“句子1，句子2，and句子3”此种结构啊，只见过“比较成分1，比较成分2，and比较成分3”
如果有例句，希望能贴出来看看~~