求助GWD-8-Q17

crystalily

GWD-8-Q17:

Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D.having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E.having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have

答案是A,为什么D不对 having been beached 不是可以很好地修饰whale吗

A.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C.that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D.having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E.having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have

答案是A,为什么D不对 having been beached 不是可以很好地修饰whale吗

sy_csu

这里有两个很明显的splits：
1、having done只能用来做非限制性定语从句，并且when having done这样的句型一定错，因为having done表示发生的动作在主动之前。
2、then和subsequently重复了。

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yawgamoth86 发表于 2010-6-5 23:02
having been done本来就是典型错误的用法 而且你看 been beached是被动，后面又有by hominids 句子的意思就 ...

句子意思还是有问题啊  and前后显然一个有动词一个没有  应该平行但是不平行

Pope_Xie

zxppx 发表于 2013-6-17 08:21
"having been beached" is a passive voice construction, which in this case is inappropriate. (this do ...

感谢ZXPPX的解释，一直以为现在分词做定语的完成时态是永远错的标志。

感谢纠正！

zxppx

"having been beached" is a passive voice construction, which in this case is inappropriate. (this does NOT mean that the passive voice is incorrect in general -- there are plenty of other situations in which the passive voice is preferred or even required -- but it just doesn't work here.)
in particular, if i say "an X ... having been stolen", the implication of the passive voice is that someone else stole X.
similarly, "having been beached" seems to indicate that someone else beached the whale. that's not true.
来源于：
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/sc-fossils-and-whales-sv-agreement-and-prep-phrase-mod-t7965.html

Spencer125

本题易错点其实是B选项。  b 中then 和 subsequently 重复了，所以 错了！

HarrisZheng

可是这个句子的主语不是fossils吗，为什么之后并列的动词was butchered 的主语又变成了whale呢？求解~~

-- by 会员 何倩倩 (2011/11/22 22:20:03)

Fossils（主） of a whale（介词短语作定语修饰fossils） that（定语从句修饰whale，先行词that指代whale，在从句中做主语） beached（从句谓语） on an African shore more than a million years ago（从句状语） and was subsequently butchered（从句并列谓语） by hominids（从句第二谓语之宾语） have been recovered（主句谓语） by paleontologists（主句宾语）.

何倩倩

可是这个句子的主语不是fossils吗，为什么之后并列的动词was butchered 的主语又变成了whale呢？求解~~

hanlei8492

了解句意还是很重要的，否则在主动和被动力纠结……

ken178

请问这种having been  结构如果出现是不是通常是错误的呢？陈向东的语法也是这么说的？
这题我把was看成修饰fossils，选错了。哎