OG12 25求教

ozymendias · 发表于 2010-5-19 21:48:01

25. Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars
have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an
all-female cult that, perhaps as early as the sixth
century B.C., worshipped a goddess known in Latin as
Bona Dea, “the good goddess.”
(A) Based on accounts of various ancient writers,
(B) Basing it on various ancient writers’ accounts,
(C) With accounts of various ancient writers used
for a basis,
(D) By the accounts of various ancient writers
they used,
(E) Using accounts of various ancient writers,

OG对选项C和D的解释就是wordy 和 awkward, 那么请问这是指by the accounts of 和 with acoounts of 这两个搭配吗？

lenaqiao · 发表于 2010-5-22 13:12:28

迷惑：为什么A 'based on' incorrectly modifies 'scholars'? 我感觉可以说得通啊~~~纠结了很久了

ozymendias · 发表于 2010-5-20 19:15:23

和A相比，C,D都有个“尾巴”，使句子复杂化，让阅读的人较为迷惑。Just my two cents.

-- by 会员 bigjoe (2010/5/20 18:51:28)

恩很形象，谢谢~

ozymendias · 发表于 2010-5-20 19:14:18

呵呵读的时候的确觉得没答案的好，但目前水平有限不那么敏感~
受教了~ 万分感谢

bigjoe · 发表于 2010-5-20 18:51:28

和A相比，C,D都有个“尾巴”，使句子复杂化，让阅读的人较为迷惑。Just my two cents.

recoupsin · 发表于 2010-5-20 13:59:55

(D) By the accounts of various ancient writers
they used,
简单地说吧，by介词短语在句首做状语，其主语还是句子主语，表示通过某种方式或途径啊，从而修饰整个句子。
而且你不觉得读起来很爽，不会在读的时候没有“有歧义”的感觉么？如果没有不就是正确的么？

ozymendias · 发表于 2010-5-20 00:31:18

又是一个逻辑主语和方式状语的问题。
顶~呵呵

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/19 23:44:21)

逻辑主语知道，方式状语愿闻其详啊~~

recoupsin · 发表于 2010-5-19 23:44:21

又是一个逻辑主语和方式状语的问题。
顶~呵呵

ozymendias · 发表于 2010-5-19 21:50:06

划线句是Based on accounts of various ancient writers,

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