(A) When drafting theDeclaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's RightsConvention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was acall for female enfranchisement.
A选项错误首先drafting没有逻辑主语
我不明白的是这句话included in it bythe author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
我觉得这句话不就是个倒装吗?主语是a call 谓语是was
还原整句话就是a call for femaleenfranchisement was included in it 这样有错吗?
就是因为这里面没有理由使用倒装,所以prep认为这个句子语法错误啊~正确的用法就是应该what was included in it by the author was a call...: what was included是主语从句,相当于一个名词,后面的was是谓语,a call是宾语
-- by 会员 MollyDong (2010/5/1 10:50:30)
哎 我实在转不过来了 what was included in it by the author was a call...:这句话是么有问题的,I know 可是, included in it was a call 又有什么不对呢 倒装过来就是:a call was included in it。 非常非常非常不明白
-- by 会员 AmyGMAT (2010/5/1 11:31:11)
倒过来就是a call was included in it. 但是 前面的哦when drafting 的逻辑主语就是 a call 而a call 是不可以做drafting 的逻辑主语的。所以a选项错。
就是因为这里面没有理由使用倒装,所以prep认为这个句子语法错误啊~正确的用法就是应该what was included in it by the author was a call...: what was included是主语从句,相当于一个名词,后面的was是谓语,a call是宾语
-- by 会员 MollyDong (2010/5/1 10:50:30)
哎 我实在转不过来了 what was included in it by the author was a call...:这句话是么有问题的,I know 可是, included in it was a call 又有什么不对呢 倒装过来就是:a call was included in it。 非常非常非常不明白