请教一道题: GWDTN24-Q30-PP79

chicago328

Q30P79.

Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.

A.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

B.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress

C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

D.Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed

E.Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing

答案是D

这道题做得有点晕。请问一下其他的选项错在那里呢？

谢谢！！！

我不爱养宠物

经典题型，题眼在未划线部分。
A.based on？Women based on？错误。未划线部分的and that跟前面不平行
B.Based on错误同A，时态错误。且后面无法与前面平行
C.That错误
D.Correct
E.就不说了，一对比，错误很明显

ayoyoyo

AB：based修饰women，意思不合逻辑；
C：选项部分本身没问题，但是看后面"and that this robe depicted "和前面接起来变成“...to weave a new woolen robe that this robe depicted..."，显然重复了一遍"this robe"
D：在这个选项中后面的"that this robe..."是和前面的"indicate that..."平行的，不存在C所述的重复问题了，是indicate that... and that... 结构。
E：首先indicate少了that就很不好，未划线部分的that也没有平行对象；然后each year后面接had done也很不好；然后for doing也不太好。

qiuhua01234567

C果然tricky，简单重复没看出来。。

girasol0821

顶~谢谢

geegee

１，句首主谓搭配错误：如Ａ，Ｂ，年轻的雅典女人ｂａｓｅｄ．．．是错误的。
２，ｅａｃｈ　ｙｅａｒ用过去完成时是错误的，如Ｅ中，一般过去时是对的。
３，ａ．．．robe that they used to dress：ｕｓｅｄ　ｔｏ　本身是个固定搭配，表示过去经常做的事情，现在不做了。用在这里，容易使意思含糊，所以舍弃这个结构，如在Ｃ当中，另外，ａｃｃｏｒｄｉｎｇ　ｔｏ没问题的。

ttc12345

如果原文是说根据records，Athenian women collaborated呢？ 就是说雅典妇女每年根据古雅典的记录聚集到一起织东西呢？

venus2elva

C很tricky了，平行的问题。

句子结构是这样 Records…indicate that… women collaborated… with which they… and that this robe…

According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
这里面and前后的两个部分平行，后面的还原之后即是：a new woolen robe that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.
不可原谅的重复。。。

koala1000

同问

chicago328

首先根据原文直译，是一个record显示雅典人的什么什么，A，B则是说雅典人根据什么record而做什么什么，排除。E选项indicate后面是宾语从句，不能省略that。

-- by 会员 冬冬小宅 (2010/2/24 12:37:56)

谢谢！ 看来A B扭曲了提干的愿意。有道理。那么C错在那里呢？