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cynthia627

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.

(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make

(B) million, a part of a deal that makes

(C) million, part of a deal making

(D) million as a part of a deal to make

(E) million as part of a deal that will make

oma:E

这道题我真是一点思路也没有……我觉得A肯定是错的。which指代不能指代一句话嘛。然后 b---e就不会了！各位高人，请指教！！！万分感谢！！！

lpdeng

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.

(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make

(B) million, a part of a deal that makes    

*  a part of a deal 作为同位语没有指代对象； makes时态与主句将来时不一致

(C) million, part of a deal making    

* part of a deal 作为同位语没有指代对象； making修饰deal 不知道对不对，但感觉上从句更能表达出时态


(D) million as a part of a deal to make  

* d放回原句，提炼句子主干：it （computer company） will purchase division to make it (computer company) the largest manufacturer.  改变了原句的意思。 原句是说 a deal makes it (computer company) the largest manufacturer.  

(E) million as part of a deal that will make

* as + 短语作状语。 that引导deal的同位语从句。 will make与主句时态一直。

oma:E

这道题我真是一点思路也没有……我觉得A肯定是错的。which指代不能指代一句话嘛。然后 b---e就不会了！各位高人，请指教！！！万分感谢！！！

-- by 会员 cynthia627 (2009/11/30 19:37:32)

zhaoyiqing

要用将来时
D的 TO DO逻辑主语不清

cynthia627

我自己顶~ 各位高人，期待您们的解答啊！谢谢谢谢谢谢！