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cdxiaobao

183. (28680-!-item-!-188;#058&003109)     (GWD-6-Q22)



Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore

B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh

D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh

E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

问题：A有什么绝对性错误么？还是只是比E啰嗦一些呢？

        想半天没想通，望大家指点~

milichen

run-on 错误，Charles Lindbergh，he therefore, 'he'多余。

cdxiaobao

谢谢payo啦

payo

嗯

cdxiaobao

therefore不能做连词是不是A就是一个逗号前后有两个完整句，而没有连词所以错误呢？

payo

therefore不作连词
attempt at ？不确定