试写了篇作文,这大概什么程度呢

windface

语法错误太多了，cousin到底是男的还是女的？

逻辑也不是很连贯

babyohyea

这个题目是,should physical exercise be a required part of every school day , or should school spend all day on study

离考试还有十天,对自己作文没底...帮忙看下啊.

Many junior schools plan to add so mandatory physical exercise during the day.Is it worth and sensible to sarcrify time in school in exchang of exercise?My answer will be positive.

Children have already been overburdened, they need some activity to relax in school.I have a 14 years old cousin.One weekends ,he come to visit me.However ,since i am an university student and am capable of teaching her and she also have too many homework to be done, 70% percent of our time is spent in solving math problems.He is mere a 14 years old child,but he has to work on school's assignment on the weekends, which is supposed to be leisure time.They need exercise to relax.Otherwise, these children will collapse sooner or later.

Exercise is nodoubtly a good way to strenthen body,and is particularly important for children.Health is basis for everything.Children of 10~15 tend to grow more rapidly than they are in other period of life.And this period of time , set the basis for their furture health.It's neccessary to add exercise course in school sechule.

Doing exercise help to improve study efficience in some way.It's hard for children to concentrate on lession for more than 20 minutes ,especial when their age are above 15.Constant work at school may not increase productivity, but exercise does.Exercise help them relax and get ready for next class.

In concludsion , i believe school ought to add phsical exercise in sechule not purely pursue teaching.It's good for children themselive and good for study.