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拜托大家了，我还有三个星期就考了，如果没时间就打个分吧（T-T）

    

4Which
knowledge is more important?

    

Knowldege is power,thus peole use various
methods to acquire it at present,some read books while others go into the
society to gain knowledge from their experience.Despite of the fact that  the merits and demerits of both methods exist
in many aspercts,I regard the knowledge from practice as my propensity.

    

 

    

It cannot be dennied that knowledge from
books has its unique advantages.It can be get in an easy and convinient way,one
can just pick books up from bookstores and read them.Moreover,when the authors
wrote books,they usually arrange the knowledge contained in a logical and
systematic way,therefore,readers can have a better understandding of the
knowledge.

    

 

    

Even though the knowledge from books have
ascendancies in some degree,the knowledge from practice still overwhelm it in
most cases.

    

 

    

In my part,knowledge from pratice can help
people better not only in their jobs but also in their daily lives and other
aspects.Usually,students at a university have the oppotunieties to get
knowledge from books in wide variety of subjects ,but most of  they let the knowledge become useless because
of the lack of practice,which is also the primary reason why a diploma of a
bacherlor’s degree are losing its value gradually during the years.On the
contrary,the knowledge from practice,once you get it,you can put it into use
immediately and enjoy its benefits directly.Take one of my friends for
example,who majored in laws at university.When he was in college,he just simply
recited the law items and the examples given in the books which turned out to
be of little use when he became a lawyer after graduation.It is the knowledge
he got from practice that led to his success at last.

    

 

    

Moreover,the knowledge form pratice will
not be forgotten especially compared with the knowledge from books.For
example,when I was a freshman,I had some ecnomic courses，but I found I almost forgot half of
the knowledge when the following semester came.On the other hand, I learned to
buy stocks since last year.From the real stockjobbing,I gained much knowledge
and also had a better understanding of what I have learned before.These
knowledge are those I would never forget about.

    

 

    

According to the analysis of the advantages
and disadvantages of these different kinds of knowledge,I strongly insist on my
choice as the knowledge from practice can help people better in their lives and
not so easy to forget.Therefore,we should pay more attention to the knowledge
get from practice and try to get more chance to gain it.