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这次虽然比上次快但还是用了一个小时。。。下午看了很多好的句子和词组，想用进去，所以在想句子和词上花了不少时间。下回一定要再加快速度。另外字数是不是还是多了呢。总觉得有很多东西可写的样子。
Topic: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support opinion by using specific reasons and details. Part-time job is becoming increasingly prevailing in Chinese Campus. In my collage, myriads of students, with full of enthusiastic, are eager to hunt jobs, such as assistants of professor, translator in library and tutors for some students in high school. What comes along with this popular phenomenon and whether students can acquire tangible merits virtually from it are hot-button discussions to multitudes. Part-time job, from my perspective, is a necessity to current students living in the pure atmosphere of campus. These months, the graduation from universities, a huge challenge, is coming to those seniors who experience full-four-year academic study. Facing a labor market supplement with massive surplus, a multitude of corporations demonstrate their standards involving a crucial requirement of work experience to all graduates. In this case, those who have done part-time jobs during school years seem to more confidential to confront this new item. As a matter of fact, few things can be more impressive than experienced students to those companies. I believe firmly that most top managers prefer those who are able to deal with the transactions in appropriate methods skillfully, arrange the schedules elaborately without serious errors and accomplish the documents and submit them within two or three hours. Above circumstances may be impossible to a new graduate unless he possesses the experience from part-time job. Besides to gain experience for future career, simultaneously, promotion of personal ability for combination of the book knowledge and practical experience is another obvious reason. Despite of the unshakeable position of knowledge in text book to students, nonetheless, this is only part of the picture. Just with those books, occasionally, one can not understand couples of boring theories appearing to have nothing to do with our actual life. Yet via the help of part-time job, we may find the tedious contents in books look like a piece of alluring cake waiting for us to convince in practice. For instance, a series of working experience in accounting agency is cherishing treasure for students whose major is accounting. One may discover more fun and interests when in front of him is abundant tasks rather than a pile of thick and heave books, and finally, his skills was attain another higher level. Admittedly, some bothersome troubles may stem from part-time job, especially when the students fail to keep the balance between study and job. And it is no denying that several of my classmates did not pass the final resulting from their part-time job. However, these problems are not unavoidable as long as students succeed to make a proper plan for themselves. And the advantages from part-time jobs far outweigh the shortcomings of it. In a word, considering the future development and ability promotion, part-time job is superior to a monotonous school life only consisting of study and study.
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