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Day67
1.(261)The crash in Brent crude prices in 2014 and 2015 was particularly hard on jobs in the U.S. mining sector, including support services in oil fields that had ripple effects on construction and manufacturing, partly because American companies make much of the world’s mining equipment.

A) including support services in oil fields that had
B) which includes support services in oil fields, and had
C) which includes support services in oil fields that had
D) and support services in oil fields had
E) and support services in oil fields, which had

2.(262)It is not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as it is finding itself temporarily popular among those seeking a unique blend of nostalgia and nouveau chic.

A. not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as it is finding
B. not that so much ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance; rather it finds
C. that ventriloquism enjoys so much of a renaissance but that it finds
D. not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as that it is finding
E. that ventriloquism, so much, enjoys a renaissance as that it is finding

3.(263)Although blue herons can still be found along the Maine coast, their population has declined dramatically when compared to the 1970’s, a period in which there were fewer bald eagles competing with them for food and nesting sites.

A)their population has declined dramatically when compared to the 1970s
B) their population has declined dramatically compared with the 1970s
C)their populations have declined dramatically since the 1970s
D) their populations have declined in comparison to those of the 1970s
E) their population has declined in comparison with that of the 1970s

4.(264)A 1999 tax bill changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations are allowed to deduct on their tax returns.

A) changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations are allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
B) changed wealthy taxpayers' and large corporations' amounts that they have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
C) is changing wealthy taxpayers' and large corporations' amounts that they have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
D) changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations had been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
E) changes what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.

5.(265)The Justice Department will likely weigh the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.

A) the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
B) the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also the precedent the ruling will set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
C) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
D) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but of the precedent the ruling will set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
E) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.

6.(266)Many heavy metals such as iron, gold, and silver have essentially no deleterious effect on human cells; cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, or liver – and impede metabolic functions.

a) cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, or liver – and impede metabolic functions

b) however, even a trace amount of cadmium, lead, and mercury can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, and liver – and impede metabolic functions making them extremely harmful

c) cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, and liver – and cause metabolic functions to be impeded by them

d) however, because even a trace amount of cadmium, lead, and mercury can bioaccumulate in the body, lungs, kidneys, or liver, and impede metabolic functions, they are extremely harmful

e) however, cadmium, lead, and mercury have a trace amount that can bioaccumulate in the body, specifically in the lungs, kidneys, or liver, impeding metabolic functions and causing extreme harm

7.(267)The United States had never previously experienced so many electoral disputes at once as it had in the storied 1876 presidential election, in which Rutherford B. Hayes was ultimately named the winner.

(A) so many electoral disputes at once as it had in
(B) at once as many electoral disputes as
(C) at once as many electoral disputes that there were with
(D) as many electoral disputes at once as it experienced in
(E) as many electoral disputes at once as it had experienced in

8.(268)If the recent Harvard study on analyzing social cues is accurate, the difference in comprehension between the Jahai people of the Malay Peninsula and English-speaking Europeans was so pronounced that the gap in an earlier study, done three decades ago by researchers at MIT, between two similar groups, the Kalahari bushmen and English-speaking Americans.

(A) so pronounced that
(B) pronounced to such a degree that
(C) as pronounced as
(D) as pronounced that
(E) pronounced;

9.(269)The remaining Florida oranges are shipped out fresh, the vast majority exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, where people love premium citrus.

A. fresh, the vast majority exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, where

B. fresh, the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, a place where

C. fresh and the vast majority are exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, whose

D. fresh and the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, where

E. fresh and the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, whose

10.(270)Genetic research suggests that after cheetah ancestors had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that have wiped out its populations on other continents.

A. had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that have wiped out its

B. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species was safe from the ice ages that wiped out its

C. had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species was safe from the ice ages that wiped out their

D. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to be much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species has been safe from the ice ages that wiped out its

E. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that wiped out their

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Day67 （错了1 4 5 7 9 10）
1.(261)The crash in Brent crude prices in 2014 and 2015 was particularly hard on jobs in the U.S. mining sector, including support services in oil fields that had ripple effects on construction and manufacturing, partly because American companies make much of the world’s mining equipment.

A) including support services in oil fields that had
B) which includes support services in oil fields, and had
C) which includes support services in oil fields that had
D) and support services in oil fields had
E) and support services in oil fields, which had
答案：C
Including修饰the crash，the crash包括support services，不符合逻辑，排除A；and had 与was hard并列，不符合语义，排除B；D？
Which修饰oil fields，不符合逻辑，排除E

2.(262)It is not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as it is finding itself temporarily popular among those seeking a unique blend of nostalgia and nouveau chic.

A. not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as it is finding
B. not that so much ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance; rather it finds
C. that ventriloquism enjoys so much of a renaissance but that it finds
D. not so much that ventriloquism is enjoying a renaissance as that it is finding
E. that ventriloquism, so much, enjoys a renaissance as that it is finding
答案：D
Not so much that…as that…并列选D

3.(263)Although blue herons can still be found along the Maine coast, their population has declined dramatically when compared to the 1970’s, a period in which there were fewer bald eagles competing with them for food and nesting sites.

A)their population has declined dramatically when compared to the 1970s
B) their population has declined dramatically compared with the 1970s
C)their populations have declined dramatically since the 1970s
D) their populations have declined in comparison to those of the 1970s
E) their population has declined in comparison with that of the 1970s
答案：C

4.(264)A 1999 tax bill changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations are allowed to deduct on their tax returns.

A) changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations are allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
B) changed wealthy taxpayers' and large corporations' amounts that they have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
C) is changing wealthy taxpayers' and large corporations' amounts that they have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
D) changed what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations had been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
E) changes what many wealthy taxpayers and large corporations have been allowed to deduct on their tax returns.
答案：D
Changed为过去时，are allowed to时态不正确，排除A；they无指代，排除B；is changing时态不对，they无指代，排除C；changes与have been allowed不正确，排除E

5.(265)The Justice Department will likely weigh the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.

A) the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
B) the substance not only of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also the precedent the ruling will set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
C) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also of the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
D) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but of the precedent the ruling will set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
E) not only the substance of the judge’s upcoming ruling, but also the precedent the ruling would set if it countermands a direct order from the executive branch.
答案：A
Not only of…but also不平行，排除B；not only…but also of…不平行，排除C；not only…but of…不平行，排除D；E？

6.(266)Many heavy metals such as iron, gold, and silver have essentially no deleterious effect on human cells; cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, or liver – and impede metabolic functions.

a) cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, or liver – and impede metabolic functions

b) however, even a trace amount of cadmium, lead, and mercury can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, and liver – and impede metabolic functions making them extremely harmful

c) cadmium, lead, and mercury, however, are extremely harmful because even a trace amount can bioaccumulate in the body – specifically the lungs, kidneys, and liver – and cause metabolic functions to be impeded by them

d) however, because even a trace amount of cadmium, lead, and mercury can bioaccumulate in the body, lungs, kidneys, or liver, and impede metabolic functions, they are extremely harmful

e) however, cadmium, lead, and mercury have a trace amount that can bioaccumulate in the body, specifically in the lungs, kidneys, or liver, impeding metabolic functions and causing extreme harm
答案：A
Making them extremely harmful修饰functions，错误，排除B；cause metabolic functions to be impeded by them不简洁，排除C；lungs, kidneys or liver属于body一部分，并列不符合逻辑，排除D；impeding and causing harm修饰have a trace amount，语义错误，排除E

7.(267)The United States had never previously experienced so many electoral disputes at once as it had in the storied 1876 presidential election, in which Rutherford B. Hayes was ultimately named the winner.

(A) so many electoral disputes at once as it had in
(B) at once as many electoral disputes as
(C) at once as many electoral disputes that there were with
(D) as many electoral disputes at once as it experienced in
(E) as many electoral disputes at once as it had experienced in
答案：A
比较对象不对等，排除B；there无指代，排除C；D？
Had experienced in表示过去的影响一直持续，不正确，排除E

8.(268)If the recent Harvard study on analyzing social cues is accurate, the difference in comprehension between the Jahai people of the Malay Peninsula and English-speaking Europeans was so pronounced that the gap in an earlier study, done three decades ago by researchers at MIT, between two similar groups, the Kalahari bushmen and English-speaking Americans.

(A) so pronounced that
(B) pronounced to such a degree that
(C) as pronounced as
(D) as pronounced that
(E) pronounced;
答案：C
That 和分号后面接句子，排除A B D E

9.(269)The remaining Florida oranges are shipped out fresh, the vast majority exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, where people love premium citrus.

A. fresh, the vast majority exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, where

B. fresh, the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, Singapore, a place where

C. fresh and the vast majority are exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, whose

D. fresh and the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, where

E. fresh and the vast majority is exported to Canada, Europe, China, and, increasingly, to Singapore, whose
答案：D
A？
逗号连接俩句子，排除B；whose修饰人，排除C E

10.(270)Genetic research suggests that after cheetah ancestors had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that have wiped out its populations on other continents.

A. had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that have wiped out its

B. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species was safe from the ice ages that wiped out its

C. had migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species was safe from the ice ages that wiped out their

D. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels are thought to be much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species has been safe from the ice ages that wiped out its

E. migrated from North America to Asia more than 100,000 years ago, when sea levels were thought to have been much lower, they quickly spread to Africa, where the species is safe from the ice ages that wiped out their
答案：E
They与its矛盾，排除A B D；more than 100,000 years ago，用had migrated不恰当，排除C

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Day 67 DDCAA ADCAB （错两个）
1. 错了
A：that 指代的是support service in oil fields, 所以原句的意思变成：这个部门是括support services, 是那个对建筑业和制造业有影响的support service。 逻辑有问题：应该是价格的下降对他影响，而不是service对他造成影响，不对
B：正确，the crash in prices was hard on..., 修饰mector，and had effects on...
C：同理A
D：同理A
E：句子结构不完整，少了个verb, 和A的错误也一样
2.
平行结构trigger：not such X as Y, 所以只能选D
3.
A：when的用法不太好；比较的对象population 和 1970s比较
B：同理比较population 和 1970s；且populations 复数
C：正确
D：感觉those of the 1970s, a period 不太好；并且用those 和that 通常要加additional info 去说明为什么不同
E：同理
4.
A：正确：tax bill 改变 something that many taxpayers are allowed to deduct on their payments.
B: they 指代的是amounts，逻辑错误
C：现在进行时时态错误。
D：逻辑错误；时间线的关系；过去的过去被被允许。
E：changes 时态错误
5. 错误
Not only, but also这个trigger, 找trigger后面的看看前面有无对应
所以就有A和E符合题意
A：选项意思：部门 will likely weigh the subtance not only of..., but also of t...., 注意看后面the ruling would set the substance of the precedent. 。怪
E：the department like weight not only the substance, but also substance... 很好
6.
A：正确
B：however的位置不太对；句子结构不完整；them vague
C：同理them；to be impeded;
D：同理
E： a trace amount can bioaccumulate??? 错误
7
As many as 平行结构
不需要用过去完成时
D
8.
后面一大串不是完整句子，只能选C
9.
A：正确
B：句子结构不完整，少了个连词；a place where 冗余
C：最好第一个and前面加comma，隔开；并且没有并列平行；whose修饰有问题
D：同理
E：同理
10.
A：过去完成时；level were thought 错误，应该是现在的人认为高度，用are；
B：正确
C：同理A时态；并且their 无指代，只能指ice ages 错误。应该用its指代species
D:  are thought to be 错误；应该是have been 已经变得足够低了； has been safed 时态问题
E：同理

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我的答案：BDEDA BACAE
正确答案：BDCAE ADCAB
1.
根据逻辑意思，that had并不应该修饰oil fields，排除ACE
D 也不是support services had
2.
平行搭配not so much that … as that …，排除ABCE
3.
这个句子并没有比较的含义，所以不能选带有比较意思的
4.
这个句子首先1999 tax是过去时的标志，应该用changed，排除CE
B ‘s amounts不对
剩下AD，考察的是时态的问题。Tax 的改变影响的是之后的事情，而不是之前的事情所以不能用过去完成时，排除D
5.
首先根据not only but also的平行，排除B C D
然后需要根据句子意思来判断到底是the substance of the precedent 还是the precednet，后者是对的，排除E
6.
B C D 都有代词指代的问题
E 逻辑不对
7.
根据平行，可以排除BC
A so many as错误
E 1876是过去时，时态错误
8.
这个地方是平行结构as pronounced as
9.
B 两个完成句子链接没有连词
C whose不对
D is 不对
E is 不对，whose也不对
10.
首先根据过去时用migrated，排除AC
D 认为过去lower 排除
E 应该用are thought to 表示现在的科学家认为