两个题目里相似的错误选项，求总结？求错误的类别？

十码96

下题（OG 13）的E选项
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year - they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises - heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

• AAlthough appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
• BAlthough heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
• CAlthough they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
• DGrown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
• EHeirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
  

和下题的E选项
Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.

• AHurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but
• BAt first, hurricanes travel from east to west, because that is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics, but
• CWhile hurricanes travel from east to west at first, the direction of the prevailing winds blowing in the tropics, and
• DBecause hurricanes at first travel from east to west, since it is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,
• EHurricanes, beginning by traveling from east to west, because this is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,
  

求问大N，这两个错误的类别是什么？仅仅是转折词前不是完整句子？

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spicytaco

不懂

我只懂 主谓宾 ，单复数 ， 各个词性词一般能做什么成分之类的

修饰成分尽可能靠近被修饰的成分 逻辑要通顺 文辞要简洁

十码96

spicytaco 发表于 2018-10-7 14:19
E 。 Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less a ...

请问有什么term总结此类错误吗？

spicytaco

E 。 Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins  - they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises - heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
看出问题了么？ 1语序太乱 2  把修饰成分，红色部分删除，自己读读





E. Hurricanes, beginning by traveling from east to west, because this is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.

去掉红色部分读读  
语序同样很wordy...而且, beginning by traveling from east to west修饰可疑