求助：Notre Dame2018年的第一篇essay

levieen

ND今年的第一篇essay题目：
Cardinal O'Hara established the Mendoza College of Business at Notre Dame in 1921, recognizing that "the primary function of commerce is service to mankind." As the world economy continues to grow and change, how do you see business positively impacting the world?

感觉方向好大，有点不知从何下手，需要结合自己的经历吗？

万分感谢！

levieen

JonFrank 发表于 2018-2-28 21:45
Great question! So if you consider the essay prompt elements, you want to provide your opinion on ho ...

Got it!

Thanks, Jon!!

JonFrank

Great question! So if you consider the essay prompt elements, you want to provide your opinion on how you see business impacting the world positively. Now, how best to do this? You want to use your experiences and even your future goals (if applicable) to provide SUPPORT and credibility for your stated view and opinion.

This way yes, you are talking about your experiences but in a way where you are using them as evidence to share your own unique view, making your response very personal and "real."  Best,

Jon Frank