老prep-pack2-91题 求大神们问E错在哪里？

Elenalyl

The spectaculardisintegration of a comet last year in full view of ground- and space-basedtelescopes provided new insights into how comets form and may thus force a rethinking of the role of comets in the delivery of organic compoundsto the evolving Earth.

(A) The spectacular disintegration ofa comet last year in full view of ground- and space-based telescopes providednew insights into how comets form and may thus force

(B) The spectacular disintegration ofa comet last year in full view of ground- as well as space-based telescopes,provided new insights into how comets form and thus possibly forcing

(C) When a comet's spectaculardisintegration occurred in full view of ground- and space-based telescopes lastyear, it provided new insights into how comets form and thus may possibly force

(D) Last year, in full view ofground- and space-based telescopes, a comet's spectacular disintegrationprovided new insights into how comets form and thus possibly forcing

(E) Last year, in full view ofground- as well as space-based telescopes, the spectacular disintegration of acomet has provided new insights into how comets form and may thus force

求问E错在哪里？

答案为A

Elenalyl

yougushizi 发表于 2018-1-6 00:52
同意，E的last year和has provided不一直, 应该是过去时。
BCD有redundant问题

感谢~

yougushizi

Elenalyl 发表于 2018-1-4 11:37
我个人的理解，不知道对不对
has provided时态错误，同时last year位置改变，修饰整个句子，使得整个句子发 ...

同意，E的last year和has provided不一直, 应该是过去时。
BCD有redundant问题

Elenalyl

求助~

Elenalyl

我个人的理解，不知道对不对
has provided时态错误，同时last year位置改变，修饰整个句子，使得整个句子发生的时间都在last year，而原句知识表达了彗星的分解发生在去年而已，原句意思改变。