OG12-53

Raycyn

The nineteenth-centurychemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his“Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle aswell as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

A.    a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a

B.    a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also hisenvisioning of a

C.    a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well

D.     critiquing all chemistryfrom Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of         (A)

E.    critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his ownenvisioning of

这题有点疑惑

1.A中  a critique of all chemistry 和a vision of a是parallel的可以理解

但B中 a critique of all chemistry和his envisioning of a为什么是不parallel的，我可以理解到envisioning因为是动名词所以没有vision好，但是我觉得这也没违背平行吧

2.这里的since following after 是都可以的么？？

希望各位NN指教 感谢~~~~~

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Raycyn 发表于 2017-6-25 12:34
再不好意思问一道题
According to surveys by the National Institute on Drug Abuse, about 20 percent  ...

这里无论那个选项里的those都只能指代young adults，不包括定语的。

D的问题是在much上吧。

Raycyn

fxxxfxxx 发表于 2017-6-25 01:47
首先这题选D是因为确实是discovery lead to这应该没有问题。

对于这种修饰来说，按照ron的说法是concret ...

再不好意思问一道题
According to surveys by the National Institute on Drug Abuse, about 20 percent of young adults used cocaine in 1979, doubling those reported in the 1977 survey.
(A) doubling those reported in the 1977 survey
(B) to double the number the 1977 survey reported
(C) twice those the 1977 survey reported
(D) twice as much as those reported in the 1977 survey
(E) twice the number reported in the 1977 survey
这题D的问题是不是出在了those？因为刚刚在查抽象名词的同位语时候看到这题回答者说
3. COMMA + Adjective:
As we know adjective modifies the NOUN. In this case COMMA + Adjective modifies the NOUN phrase "about 20 percent of young adults".

所以他无法解释了，我想问这里是不是those无法指代 about 20 percent of young adults，或者说应该是指the number或者percents，而他们没有出现在题目里？
所以double，twice as many as只能比较一个类似increase 或者number这样的量词？

Raycyn

fxxxfxxx 发表于 2017-6-25 01:47
首先这题选D是因为确实是discovery lead to这应该没有问题。

对于这种修饰来说，按照ron的说法是concret ...

啊在beatgmat找到一个
1. COMMA + Abstract NOUN

--> This appositive modifies the entire preceding clause.

Example:
The committee has shown how to use the substance properly, a suggestion that will help the poor.

2. COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN:
--> This modifies the preceding NOUN before comma.

Example:
They have made Shourav Ganguli, the Indian cricket captain, the chair of the committee.

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Raycyn 发表于 2017-6-25 00:25
恩恩好的~
NN我想再问一个问题
While studying thegenetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes ...

首先这题选D是因为确实是discovery lead to这应该没有问题。

对于这种修饰来说，按照ron的说法是concrete noun只能修饰noun，abstract noun可修饰的范围更广。感兴趣的话可以搜一下。

我个人来看的方法其实就是看这里的noun是否能够代表前面所要修饰的意思，比如这里的discovery肯定可以修饰前面的discovered这个动作，因为discover就是make a discovery的意思啊。

Raycyn

fxxxfxxx 发表于 2017-6-24 23:14
没有必要深究OE，其实这里你对选项的判断就很准确了。

平行关系的比较都是相对的不是决定的 ...

恩恩好的~
NN我想再问一个问题

While studying thegenetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered byBarbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of celldifferentiation.

A.    a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, adiscovery which led

B.    a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by BarbaraMcClintock, leading

C.    Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led

D.     Barbara McClintockdiscovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led     (D)

E.    Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading

这里D是同位语，prep08的笔记里说是同位语修饰前面整个句子，可我看之前的笔记又说同位语只能修饰noun或名词短语，这里怎么解释？

那如果这里的a discovery 是做a new class of mutant genes的同位语的话，那么C中的it不也是指代也是a new class of mutant genes吗？那这CD不就没有区别了吗?

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Raycyn 发表于 2017-6-24 20:53
恩恩我知道his是有问题的，但是答案里说的是平行问题，所以就想问一下这个平行的问题出在了哪里？？ ...

没有必要深究OE，其实这里你对选项的判断就很准确了。

平行关系的比较都是相对的不是决定的

fxxxfxxx

Raycyn 发表于 2017-6-24 20:53
恩恩我知道his是有问题的，但是答案里说的是平行问题，所以就想问一下这个平行的问题出在了哪里？？ ...

就是没有A好，这就足够了

Raycyn

fxxxfxxx 发表于 2017-6-24 19:48
这里选A没什么问题，B不止是平行的问题，这里his的指代也是明显有歧义的。 ...

恩恩我知道his是有问题的，但是答案里说的是平行问题，所以就想问一下这个平行的问题出在了哪里？？

fxxxfxxx

这里选A没什么问题，B不止是平行的问题，这里his的指代也是明显有歧义的。