OG 17版 764题 The 19-year-old pianist and composer

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OG 17版 764题

The 19-year-old pianist and composer performed his most recent work all over Europe, Asia, and North America last year, winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago.
A. winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping
B. winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and hoping
C. having won prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, hoping
D. winning prestigious awards in both London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and he hopes
E. having won prestigious awards both in London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he hopes

答案是 d
这道题中 关于c选项og指出的错误是 the present-perfect participial phrase "having won" suggests that his winning took place before his performance tour< furthermore, the use of "hoping" in this version of the sentence suggests that hoping is something the pianist did while on his performance tour last year, but the final phrase , "now that he has returned to Chicago' indicates this is not so.

我不是很理解 我最初理解的意思就是 “年轻钢琴家曾经获奖了 （所以用present-perfect）-> 多地巡演 +同时希望继续作曲 （hoping）-> 回到芝加哥” 所以我选了C。

有谁能指一下我的问题么？ 谢谢

emmahiggins09

步生烟 发表于 2017-2-27 04:56
对的 其实both那个地方 还有such young C选项基本已经可以判断是错的了 只是我当时不是很理解og的解释 觉 ...

简单点说，画条时间轴

having done ---> main verb / ving ---> ...

这里 main verb 可以是现在时态也可以是过去时态，Ving 不论主要动词是啥时态都是和主要动作同时发生的也就是在一个时间段里的。Having done 永远就是发生在 main verb 之前的不论主要动词是现在时态还是过去时态

OG里有很多having done 的例子，楼主可以看看哦

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sheanen 发表于 2017-2-27 02:13
先得獎後表演or 先表演後得獎   這次乎都可以

但最後的,hoping.... 句意無法解釋 ,Ving 表同時或結果

对的 其实both那个地方 还有such young C选项基本已经可以判断是错的了 只是我当时不是很理解og的解释 觉得有点牵强

sheanen

先得獎後表演or 先表演後得獎   這次乎都可以

但最後的,hoping.... 句意無法解釋 ,Ving 表同時或結果

像og所說的 一個是去年一個是現在 那勢必是結果 但表演和句續compose似乎也沒因果關係

當然C選項的判題用both平行 和so young an age不如舊用such young age 這兩的可以很明顯刪除