求助：OG16 语法111题

smile冰

According to recent studies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat from domesticated animals, wild animals have less total fat than do livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat they think is good for cardiac health.

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A  wild animals have less total fat than do livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat they think is

B  wild animals have less total fat than livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be

C  wild animals have less total fat than that of livestock fed on grain and have more fat of a kind thought to be

D  total fat of wild animals is less than livestock fed on grain and they have more fat of a kind thought to be

E  total fat is less in wild animals than that of livestock fed on grain and more of their fat is of a kind they think is

C为什么错啊，不能理解比较的为什么不是宾语啊，之前看了很多帖子还是没懂。

另附一道区别题：OG19， In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.<o></o>

(A) the protein in rice is higher quality than that in<o></o>

(B) rice has protein of higher quality than that in

(C) the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in

(D) rice protein is higher in quality than it is in（B）

(E) rice has a protein higher in quality than

杯uu

讲得太棒了

sgao003

MS06 发表于 2016-9-25 13:44
C肯定是错的，than之后的是that of livestock，than之前没有出现过类似D中total of wild animals的结构。

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Mark一下！               

smile冰

MS06 发表于 2016-10-1 02:12
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/post117390.html?hilit=Prices%20at%20the%20producer%20level ...

好的，谢谢

MS06

https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/post117390.html?hilit=Prices%20at%20the%20producer%20level%20are%20only%201.3%20percent%20higher%20now#p117390
这道OG题Ron给解释了，倒数第二楼。

SC并不是那么死板的，不是完美平行不意味着错，只是最好而已。

MS06

smile冰 发表于 2016-9-29 21:21
前面要有prices of xxx year才可以的话，为什么og的这句话被认为是对的：Prices at the producer level a ...

因为其他选项都有致命错误，而这句没有，只能算不美观。

MS06

Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A. movies—less than those
B. movies—fewer than have been
C. movies, which is less than those
D. movies, a number lower than the people
E. movies, fewer than the ones

这是RON的回复
Split:when you consider parallel constructions, your main goal is just to pick the choice with the best parallelism.
if you were a writer, then you would need all kinds of subtle intuition about this kind of thing -- because writers don't get multiple-choice options!
but you get multiple-choice options, so we needn't complicate the issue any more than necessary.

in the correct answer, we have "have been killed by x" and "have been killed by y".
perfect.
you really aren't going to do any better than that!

in the choice with "those killed by bee stings" -- note that we don't have "people killed by the great white shark" in the other part.

smile冰

MS06 发表于 2016-9-29 19:02
平行结构很死板的，前面要有prices of xxx year才可以。还不清楚具体建议你去曼哈顿论坛问一下。 ...

前面要有prices of xxx year才可以的话，为什么og的这句话被认为是对的：Prices at the producer level are only 1.3 percent higher now than those of a year ago.

MS06

smile冰 发表于 2016-9-29 15:16
不好意思哈，又来打扰你了。最近看了个关于ron大神关于比较的帖子又蒙了。ron大神说这句话是错的：gas pr ...

平行结构很死板的，前面要有prices of xxx year才可以。还不清楚具体建议你去曼哈顿论坛问一下。

smile冰

MS06 发表于 2016-9-25 13:44
C肯定是错的，than之后的是that of livestock，than之前没有出现过类似D中total of wild animals的结构。

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不好意思哈，又来打扰你了。最近看了个关于ron大神关于比较的帖子又蒙了。ron大神说这句话是错的：gas prices were higher in 2007 than those in 1997.理由是nothing works on the other side. we need "gas prices in 2007" (in one piece), but only "gas prices" is there.我想问下Prices at the producer level are only 1.3 percent higher now than those of a year ago.这句话不也不对吗，those of a year ago 按照ron的意思对应的正确语序不成了prices at the producer level now are only....?我感觉现在简单的都搞不明白了。