快考试了，求救！！

小明白的囡囡

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Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many

people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

(A) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many

people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

(B) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are

disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

(C) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in

many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.

(D) Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are

disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

(E) Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while

willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.

DE纠结，

D看到夹心修饰，我就不太想选了，可是D是正解，求教为什么这就是对的呢？什么情况下是对的什么情况下夹心修饰有是错的呢？？

马上就要考试了，求助求助！

谢谢！

小明白的囡囡

HammyJiang 发表于 2016-6-9 17:03
嗯嗯我知道B是错误的，我觉得这道题只和语义有关系，根据语义coordinating只能修饰BP，杀ABD，E的coordin ...

感激！！

小明白的囡囡

masaki006 发表于 2016-6-9 18:43
那我理解错了哈哈哈，
不过E中应该是carefully coordinated them错了，拿掉插入语后them就无指代了~ ...

谢谢谢谢！

masaki006

HammyJiang 发表于 2016-6-9 17:03
嗯嗯我知道B是错误的，我觉得这道题只和语义有关系，根据语义coordinating只能修饰BP，杀ABD，E的coordin ...

那我理解错了哈哈哈，
不过E中应该是carefully coordinated them错了，拿掉插入语后them就无指代了~

HammyJiang

masaki006 发表于 2016-6-9 16:55
BP那个题我贴上去的是个错选额，正确选项是C
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coo ...

嗯嗯我知道B是错误的，我觉得这道题只和语义有关系，根据语义coordinating只能修饰BP，杀ABD，E的coordinated作谓语只能由BP完成，杀E；剩下C。
一般分词修饰语就是就近修饰它之前的名词（或名词+修饰语），修饰语在句子开头必须就近修饰紧接它出现的名词

masaki006

HammyJiang 发表于 2016-6-9 16:06
一般来说v-ing修饰名词必须紧跟在名词的后面
BP这道题的一点见解：
BP是人，illustrations是物，所以coordi ...

BP那个题我贴上去的是个错选额，正确选项是C
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her
narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them
with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her
narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her
narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book
illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with
her narratives and

OG当中就是讲B的错误其中一点就是夹心修饰。（Phrase carefully coordinating . . . illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it: book illustrations）
只有当别的错误很明显时应该才能按照你所说的那样去分析B的合理性，个人感觉哈~

HammyJiang

一般来说v-ing修饰名词必须紧跟在名词的后面
BP这道题的一点见解：
BP是人，illustrations是物，所以coordinating只能修饰人，coordinated只能修饰物，所以B选项carefully coordinating只能修饰BP
prep题目的见解：
willing引导的修饰语离被修饰的people越近，意思表达越清楚

masaki006

正好碰到了夹心修饰
In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.（OG16 121 的B）
这是夹心修饰的错误，coordinating是illustration发出的呢？还是BP发出的呢？
而你的题目修饰成分两边就只有个Many people这一个可以指代的东西了。

masaki006

整个句子的主语就是many people，
willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills前后没有出现易混淆的情况，就算你说他可能修饰后面的are。。。那它的主语是谁呢？还是many people呀。
同样不到一星期就考试了，握个爪，一起加油~