写作小白deepeye的写作贴

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deepye的第一篇：what makes a good neighbor?

写作是我备考T过程中最折磨的一项，在了解T考什么之前，我一直天真的以为T会比GMAT容易搞定。
但是独立写作真是让我抓狂啊，我真的写不出来呀！
前面考过的GMAT，AWA 5.5。实际GMAT写作相对T独立写作真可以算是比较好搞定的，只要准备好模版，找茬能找好就可以了。就这样也只有5.5呀~
我已经对着独立写作的题目沮丧了三天了，今天逼着自己模仿改写也好，字句照抄也好，但一定要按照自己的思路写出一篇文章来。
420字整整写了一个半小时，一个半小时啊~~~~~
后面每天至少一篇，但愿可以越写越快，越写越好！

希望大家可以帮我这个写作小白多提意见，万分感谢！

Neighbors are extraordinarily significantpeople, no matter how many communities people have been through from childhood toretirement. When people choose which place they want to live, neighbor isalways one of the key determinants in our cosideration. Neighbors who arefriendly, considerate and willing to help others are good choices.

One of the most important characteristicsof good neighbors is friendly, which would help experience a happy leisure timewith neighbors. Nobody wants to live in an inhospitable ambience, but there islittle likelihood with friendly neighbors. Even the simplist greeting “hi” canbe a wonderful start of association. Then with continious communication, youcan find that maybe your child and your neighbor’s child are about the same ageand she is glad to share the breeding experience with you. From this point, kindand nice neighbors privides us very cordial environment through their care andfriendship.

Another aspect of being a good neighbor isto be considerate. Why is bothersome or annoying coming into some persons’ mindwhen neighbors are mentioned? Most cases of that sitution are caused by thoughtlessactions of neighbors. For instance, a man living upstairs likes to treat hisfriends till late night, talking loudly, playing rock music, but unfortunatelyyou have to get up early in the morning and have no chance to take a nap in daywork. Therefore it is no wander that no one enjoys such kind of neighbor. Appearently,people are willing to keep maintaining their comminity with their neighborsrather than to disregard or tackle with the disturbing circumstances generatedby them. Thus people do hope their neighbors act considerately.

Other than that, being able to help you outwhen it is necessary is also viewed as a significant hallmark of good neighbor.Being trapped into troubles is occasional occourance, which everyone has toface in his or her life. Even if all the individuals have parents, relativesand friends, it is highly possible that they cann’t arrive in time to help you,then you need to account on your neighbors. They can help you solve the problem,provide useful advice or enhance your confidence if you seek help from them. Asa consequence, there is no substitue for an altruistic neighbor when youconfront with emergency.

As a whole, these are precious andindispensable qualities of good neighbors. They are friendly, considerate and alwayswilling to help others. Living with such a neighbor will make you reluctant tomove to other places.

deepeye83

勤奋的小白又来了~
这篇比上篇快那么一点点，一小时，430+
好羡慕可以挥挥手就写到500+，600+的大牛啊！

Attending Classes: required or optional?

Can students understand the knowledegethoroughly enough in the unversity only by reading books? Or, is there no useof learing from a teacher and dicussing with classmates? As far as I’mconcerned, the answer is definitely “No”, that means all the students aresupposed to abide by the rule of attending classes.

In the first place, there is no substituteof teaching if someone plans to master the knowledge and skill. Books areusually written so concisely without detailed further illustration that theteachers complement that part in classes and provide vivid examples toelaborate abstract concept. Moreover, some operations, especially, aredemonatrated only with pictures in the book, making students spend a largeamout of time to acquire by themselves. Quite the opposite, these actions willbe showed specifically by the teacher in the class, so what students need to domay be just to catch a glimpse of them. Appearently, the teachers play apivotal role in the delivery of knowledge and apart from participating classesstudents are hard-pressed to get the chance.

What’s more, discussing in a group is anessential part of education in university. Without attending classes, studentslose precise opportunity of debating academic issues with partners and thus theopportunity of sharpening their intellect. When I was learning analogintegrated circuit design in the insititue, one of my partners put forward abizzare structure of current sink.  Throughcontinuous discussion and modification, we devised a new circuit with highperformance and published a paper in an international conference. That’s howgroup discusstion works. Therefore attending class can help students fulfillthe potential that might not be achieved otherwise.

Nevertheless, some individuls may arguethat it is a waste of time for students with exceptional performance to attendclass. Perhaps this kind of students will not benefit as much as other onesfrom teachers and groups, but actually they can learn more than that, such asthe leadship in the group, the communication skills that is always useful.Additionaly, participating the classes can help students who are lack ofself-control keep pace with others. In light of these situations, attendingclasses is a considerate rule, which can elevate the capabilities of everyone, ratherthan a trade-off among students from diverse backgrounds and with differentablity.

Indisreputably, taking part in classes is asensible choice for all the students. Teachers’ illustration and classmates’discussion can enhance students’ learning and elaborate new way of thinking. Ibelieve that going to classes is supposed not to be optional, but anindispensable part of university education.