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Do you agree or disagree with taht
Students arte more influenced by teachers than by their friennds


本屌如是答Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eyes. Whether students are influenced by teachers more than by their friends. Undeniably, students are deeply influenced by both teachers and friends. But for me, I hold the opinion that teachers influence the students in a more far-reaching way than their friends do. My reasons following will substantiate my conclusion.
To begin with, a majority of teachers are well trained for teaching. They can not only teache the academy subjects but also the ethics. In term of the academy, before the teachers are qualified to teach the young, they have to be educated at least years. This education is the guarantee of a good academic base for the children. But to the friends, they just play with each other. In term of the ethics, the teachers are also educated to be kind, patient and honest. all these merits are necessary in a child's growing. But to the same age friends. they are too young to influence each other positively.
In addition, teachers are more experienced to handle the problems occur in the children's daily life. Because of the teachers' age and the experience. They always know how to guide the students and relieve their confusion. That is something friends can not do well. I think I am an epitome of this topic. When I was at my fresh year in university, I am not used to the new life. New faces and new palce. I feel frustrated. Finally this kind of frustration results in a poor score in my academic subjects. My friends tooke me to dance, drink, to forget the university. But the things got worse. my score keep dcresing. But when I met my teacher, Mis.Hu. she encouraged me and cheered me up.Under her support and guidence. Things started to make sense.I , graduall, catch up with others. Finally at the graduate exam. I got an A. My real story is convincing that teachers are more influencial to students than friends.
Last but not least,teachers' influence are more accepted by students. Students, most often than not, take their teacher as the authority. I am a student, and I always admire the teachers'intellegence and kindness. Every single word thay said will be my rule of action. But to my friends, I always hold different opinion with them. Even if,sometimes, I know they are right. I do not want to accept their ideas. For this reason. teachers influence the stuidents more.
with aspects carefully taken into consioderation. I totally agree that students are more influenced by teachers than friends.Even though students spend most of their free time with friends. their influenc is limited due to their life experience and immature mentality. But to teachers, no matter how complicate the situation encountes the students. they alwasy know how to guide students in an efficient and positive way.

晨依Jacqueline

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