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[作文互改] Issue 12 求拍砖

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发表于 2012-10-5 22:02:01 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
12) Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.



Nowadays, education becomes an important issue of our society.A high quality of education not only helps the students developments but also guarantees the human resource of our nation.In order to insure that student could have a better study resource, the government should provide finance sport for the students.However, offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university could be a hard task for the government.



Government should offer fund to help those students who want to achieve their further study.This is because it is the government's duty to guarantee the high level of education.To achieve a bachelor degree is the requirement of most student, since this degree provide them both the ability and the skill to find a job.The government, whose aim is to take care of the country, should try its best to provide its people with this opportunity. What is more, high level education is one of the most important issue of a country.We seldom see a country with a illiterate public a great nation.University study is extremely helpful to those students in their early twenties.Because university study not only provides the students knowledge, but it also helps them to build up their personality, which is the key to a person.As a result, university study makes sure that the new generation has ability and strong mind to make contributions to their motherland.Only with the high quality of human resource, the nation is likely to make new achievement.



No one is going to deny that the government, on the ground that they have the ability, should offer an opportunity to every student to go to university.However, this is an extremely harsh task for the government that it almost could never achieve.Though university education is one of the most important issues of the nation, there are other aims that the government must achieve.For example, public health is a crucial issue of a society that the government could never afford to take slight of it.The development of economy has a strong relationship with the welfare of the whole public so the government must consider it seriously.Job placement is also important, if a high proportion of people lose their job and could never afford their life, the society is more likely getting into a mass. Since there are a lot of important task for the government, it seems that we could never ask it to put great fund to the education.



Even though it is less likely that the government could provide every student an opportunity to go to the university, there are something it could do.The government is encouraged to provide financial support to those students who could not afford their tuition.Also, the government could encourage those rich people to put fund in education.There are a lot of things that a government could do to give help to the students.



To sum up, though everyone would like to see the government could make fund to all the student who wants to go to university, the governments is less likely to have the ability to achieve this aim.However, the government is able to make contributions to the education of the nation and give financial support to the students.

第一段说政府支持教育很重要
第二段说政府还要干别的
第三段,政府可以用别的方法支持教育
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发表于 2012-10-6 13:00:12 | 只看该作者
我觉得没有写到点子上,题目是,政府应该资助那些已经拿到录取的却无力支付学费的贫困学生。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-6 18:34:12 | 只看该作者
谢谢版主评价~
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