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  Put down your OG,downstairs,going pleasure trip in the street,and look around.In your sides greet you most is what?Bingo,definitely advertisements.
  Falling back to the last 20years,the advertisements plunged into our lives by countless forms with the explosive speed,newspapers TV blog and so forth.In many people's

vision,it seems that advertising industry give priority to the lucre over we do really need.Just for me ,whether advertisements really ignore our needs or do really improve

our lifes,should be discussed case by case.
  In primarily,advertising is a vehicle for trades and aim to sell products,the vehicle usually enlarge the utility of ornamental over practical values .Take familiar examples

of nowaday's digital era.My girlfriend lindsay bought Iphone5 just for instead of her Iphone 4 last month.I almost blew just this news came into my ear.Steven Jobs will get

smile in paradise,for hearing this news,Ipod may really change the world---changing the habits of consumers.Not just for my girl,look the person really in your life,they are

the epitome of today's society,greatly influenced by modern advertising---couraging you to buy something you really don't need.Recalling the mobile phones merely used,the

clothes merely weared out,the make up merely beauty your face and so forth.Advertising brings people more vanity,boast,comparing  more than do really need in realistic.This

harm replace the position initally advertising should be.
  Granted,at present advertising do consider lucre over our basic needs.However,it should attribute to the producers not advertising itself,taking its advantage into

account,advertising benefits our life even more.Similarly,take my aunt for example,she's kind of women always be curious about new fashion but with lazyness ,that she never

want to learn how to use digital technology,so it's definitely that she can't obtain them from internet. For the one like her,just as i said before,they just need to roam in

the street to take a sight around them,seeing what's changed,what's changing.For the most,they just need to spend little money in buying a monthly magazine,how low price and

high quality this is!That's the magic of advertising really have,changing the way of communication,changing the style of our life,changing the speed of the world .
  In conclusion,along with the explosion of global economic ,considering the huge contribution advertising bring to our society,as long as legislative tighten the screws of

advertising industry,not just ourselves,the whole world will gather  huge profit from it.

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求大神指导啊。