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Some people hold the opinion that living in big city is superior to living in small town in many way .Others, however, contradict living in big city. Personally, I would prefer to live in big city, because I think live in big city has more striking advantages.
There are numerous reasons why I tend to line in big city, and I would in here explain a few of the most important ones .The main reason is that there are more job opportunities readily available in the big city than in a small town. It can be given an concrete example that clock company recruit more than 100 employees in Chendu,for their local company.But they only hire less than 40 employees in second grade city.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of live in big city is that life are more convenient in miscellaneous aspect, such as traffic,and other services.Take the case of a thing that I can take taxi wherever I want and buy some luxuries I like in every shopping more, as long as I get enough  money. It’s quite obviously that living in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town.
One very strong argument for live in big city is that it is good for children’s education .This demonstration the undeniable fact that children’s education always be put in the first place for a family. We have a lot of choice to choose the best school to our kid,from kindergarten to high school.But live in small town our chooses are rather limed.
Of course, choosing live in small town also has advantage to some extent .For instance, air at downtown is more flashier more in city, and no noisy voice as living in a city, the food and vegetable also more healthier as well. In a word ,the quality of life that live in town may much higher than that in big city.
But if all these factors are contemplated ,the advantage of living in big city carry more weight than those of living in downtown .From what has been discussed above ,we may finally draw the conclusion that living in big city are more advantages than living in small city.