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发表于 2012-7-11 21:38:05 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
本人第一次把作文发上来,所以特地不限时的写了篇 没那么多错误的(自己先把最基本的拼写错误基本改掉啦),希望大家能帮我改改。我作文一直是我的软肋。第一次15分,第二次22分。。所以要加油啊!
这是那篇JJ的我忘记了。所以写下题目吧


People should take a secure job immediately when finding one instead of waiting for the job that they find more satisfying.




It is true that we all need a career, preferably a profitable one, it is equally true that not everyone can take a satisfied life. Most human beings will face the dilemma of whether to accept a secure job or waiting for more satisfying one, when seeking jobs. With all aspects carefully considered, I think take a secure job when finding one would be a better choice.


It is lucky enough to have a chance to get a secure job. Seize it or miss it. Competitions,in today, are quiet common, extremely drastic, and even ubiquitous. Even a simple job and low position will attract thousands of applicants, not to mention a satisfying one. The civil service examination, for instance, has millions of exanminees and a 1:5000 acceptance rate. Life abounds with such examples, some youngsters-who were not very excellent- made their mind to find a job with 1 million yearly salary and took no consideration about little lower salary. Failed one by one time, year by year, wasted time and gained nothing, only increased the burden on their families. Whereas, be they took these time and energy on hard working with a secure job, they would be much more possible to earn high salary or job promotion.


Waiting for a satisfying job may content people's soul. While, a secure job can meet the a man's basic requirements. The daily expense are increasing with the inflation, especially in the metropolis, and most people have to live their life on their own. Opportunities always accompany difficulties. The basic cost-in Shanghai-is approximately 5,000 yuan each month. But, how long will it take before a person find the satisfied job? Can he afford the expense if he have no income? In this situation, a secure job maybe not a ideal one, but, at least it can provide the essential spent.


To some extent, take a secure job will have advantages to seek a satisfying one. Every kinds of job provide different experience and inestimable value. Smile Destination said, "ractical wisdom is only to be learned in the school of experience." A secure job may not suit for your career prospect. Indeed, it is a good way to learn experience because majority of jobs have their similarity and connection. Like the skills of communication, the spirit of term-work and the ability of optimizing resource, which should never be learnt if someone does nothing, but just waiting. Therefore, the more experience a man have, the higher possibility he would get an ideal job.


I confess that no one dislike a satisfied job, but people should never think themselves above their business and should start at small. Take a secure job first and do with your might, the satisfying one will soon come.
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