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28号考试了,求各位大侠帮忙看改一下作文

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发表于 2009-3-10 18:13:00 | 只看该作者

28号考试了,求各位大侠帮忙看改一下作文

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

你家附近将要建一个大饭店。你同意还是反对,详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

Nowadays, a hot and essential controversy centering on the problem concerns whether should build a restaurant in my neighborhood or not. A fair proportion of people who are against building the restaurant cite the point that restaurants may lead to negative effects for our environment ; in contrast, others held the different view by saying that it is good chance to increase local economy and solve the problems of losing job. Although there may be one or two disadvantages of building a restaurant in our neighborhood; however, I believe that there are far more advantages.

 

By building a restaurant in my neighborhood, first of all, it will provide many economy chances for local producers trading with the restaurant, so it can increase inputs of the local producer. For example, the local companies which sell vegetables can directly conclude an agreement with the restaurant to support the fresh vegetables. It will take amount of profits for the company, since the restaurant can buy the fresh vegetables in a low price, and the company can sell the vegetables quickly without strong economy conflict which is always happen aboard. Also, it can be a good opportunity to increase government’s tax input. For instance, the restaurant should pay the tax. Our government can use the large mount of money on education, environment, and social welfare.

 

Another advantage to build a restaurant in my neighborhood is that it increases the position for local people who is not having job. Without a mount of workers, the restaurant can not run. The restaurant can decrease the unemployment rates because there will a lot people can find a job in the restaurant. For example, The people who has excellent skill lost job, can get a job from the new restaurant .This is not only a delight thing for the worker, but also for the restaurant .Just like my brother's friend jack, who works for the government unemployment center says the restaurant at least can solve the half of the unemployment people in the local area.

 

However, some minor disadvantages to build the restaurant in our neighborhood include environment pollution .For example ,the restaurant may dump westerly water , make loudly music, and pull out waste gas .such as the newspaper says the people who live near large restaurants always have bad health and complain the loud noise and bad air condition.

 

Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages to build a restaurant near our neighborhood, I feel that it can be more profit to us if we build the restaurant .The company which can sell their products to the restaurant can achieve large economical profits. In addition, it may help our government to help the people who lose job to get a new job. In my opinion, these are the two most important views to support the plan of building a restaurant.

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发表于 2009-3-24 13:16:00 | 只看该作者
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