5.31的问题

wangke

问各位大哥大姐个问题，在下考托两次了，关键是这次得分实在让我难以忍受
第一次

    
                
                
                
                
                
                
                
            
            
                
                
                
                
                
                
                

Test	Test Date	Reading	Listening	Speaking	Writing	Total
TELXML	February 15, 2008	28	21	15	27	91

第二次
        
                
                
                
                
                
                
                
            
            
                
                
                
                
                
                
                
            

Test	Test Date	Reading	Listening	Speaking	Writing	Total
TELXML	May 31, 2008	27	27	18	20	92

最奇怪的是作文，两次用相同的模版，第一次才写了三百多个字，第二次我还写了五百多个字呢，原本以为是28呢，真的让人难以忍受，大家能不能支支着，谢谢啦！

wangke

大哥大姐们不要只看不回啊，灌水都可以的，至少说两句吧！！

NBG

仔细看看评分者的评价，应该能发现问题所在

tootoo5478

I feel the key point is in ur writing~~~

I fully suggest u not to use writing template any more.

If u can type so many words, why not do ur writing by ur immediate thinking?

I would have the same situation as u. When I used templates b4, I got the highest writing score of 25 even though I got two "good" in my two writing sections.

However, after my friend pointed out my problem(she got 111 of ibt score), I changed my way and then used the simplest sentences and words with abundant content~~~

Finally, I got 30 in my writing....that's for ur reference...

wangke

评价在这里
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Writing  Skills	Level	Your Performance
Writing based on reading and listening	Good(4.0 - 5.0)	You responded well to the task, relating the lecture to the reading.  Weaknesses, if you have any, might have to do with slight imprecision in your summary of some of the main points and/or use of English that is occasionally ungrammatical or unclear.
Writing based on knowledge and experience	Fair(2.5 - 3.5)	You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points; your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.

第二次：

                
                
            
            
                
                
                
            
            
                
                
                

Writing  Skills	Level	Your Performance
Writing based on reading and listening	Fair(2.5 - 3.5)	You responded to the task, relating the lecture to the reading, but your response indicates weaknesses such as an important idea or ideas may be missing, unclear, or inaccurate; there may be unclarity in how the lecture and the reading passage are related; and/or grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.
Writing based on knowledge and experience	Fair(2.5 - 3.5)	You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points; your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.

小作文第一次是西伯利亚通古斯大爆炸，第二次是写一种鱼蹦啊蹦。。。
貌似我并没有漏掉什么理由，听得很清楚，成绩却不一样。。。
还有谢谢4楼的tootoo5478，不过我的水平也就局限在使用模版上面了

wangke

说真的，要是25我都能接受，差距了7分真的让人难以理解，我想了复议也不大可能一下长这么多分，大家再给点意见吧，跪求了！！

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-6-18 15:46:54编辑过]

gecko

我跟你一天考得，写作分数一样，我告诉你我综合写作多少分你都得偷着乐去，1.0~2.0，我怀疑我脑残了~

大作文写的啥也不是，模版啥的都没来得及用，字数更是不过关356，竟然good，我怀疑ETS脑残了~

gecko

我想起来了，我大作文的时候猛举例子，可见例子是多么重要啊，哪怕写作时是梦游状态，ETS就看例子，脑残啊~

gecko

对了，我想跟你咨询一下小作文咋写，不就是开头总结一下阅读听力内容的观点，然后分三段，分别从三个原因分析阅读和听力材料么？先陈述阅读第一点原因再用听力内容反驳，然后第二第三，不就是这样么？我咋能得那么低分呢？

mike1025

我和楼上情况一样，综合作文1.0-2.0 LIMITED， 大作文GOOD，作文分22，死的心都有了，而且总分99，就是那个G8作文啊，我已经复议了，不知道复议提高分数的概率大不大，我就只要1分啊~~~