帮忙看下作文。。谢谢了 3月8号就考了！！！

shamedarron

    

This question is
one of the popular arguments about whether students need to have their everyday
homework or not among us. Personally,I think teachers should assign the
homework to students every day.There are dozens of contributors why I hold this
opinion.Here,I would explore a few of the most significant ones to support my
view.

    

The principal
reason is that homework can make student understand the things that they have
learnt recently better.Also it can test students how much they know in today’s
class. If students have some difficulties in doing their homework,they will
look over and try to work out the correct ones.

    

 

    

Secondly, Though it
will reduce a lot of students’ leisure time,perhaps students will spend more time
on homework rather than playing computer games and watching TV. If they don’t
get homework from teachers they will have nothing to do but relaxing after
school.And it’s not that beneficial for them.Thus,it’ll trigger that they’ll
get terrible grades in the tests.

    

 

    

Homework can also
lead student to discuss in groups could be the last reason.Students bring their
problems into the group and work these dilemmas out together.All of them will
understand and have a deep impression on these difficulties.When students meet
them again they could easily figure them out.

    

 

    

Sum these up,it’s
good for students to have homework than they don’t.So,we can definitely draw a
conclusion that daily homework is necessary for students.

maque

举例子还是很重要的，比如你主体段第一段的difficulties, 第二段的relaxation, 第三段的problem, 都可以举个例子简单说明一下。另外，倒数第二段的主题句不对吧。