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Do you agree or disagree the following statement?
Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well.

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Everyone is eager for success and many of them resort to the experience of successful people to search for the tips of success. For me, most successful people gain great achievements because they are more willing to take new challenges and risks, and I believe only through doing this could one's success be guaranteed.

To begin with, it is the spirit of exploring unknown areas in knowledge that advances the science and identifies the great figures in the scientific field. Common senses inform us that most breakthroughs in science are based on the process that scientists explore the areas that are unknown before. We cannot imagine how the subject of physics would be if Einstein had been restricted by the classical theories established hundreds of years ago. Similarly, if Mendel had not tried the scientific experiment of planting peas, the establishment of genetics would most probably be delayed for a long time. Outstanding scientists are characterized by their motivation and courage to explore unknown areas. Such quality not only helps to advance the science but also enhance their status at the same time.

Secondly, most successful businessmen are characterized by their courage of taking risks. As we know, the most profitable opportunity also contains the greatest risk. Then if you are afraid of taking risks, you would definitely lose the opportunity. The differences between outstanding businessmen and ordinary ones lie in whether they are willing to take the risks and how they capture the opportunity. Before Bill Gates, few people would realize the promising prospect of personal computers. Gates captured this opportunity and developed the operation system that fits the computers. Then the industry giant Microsoft has emerged naturally.

Finally, the disadvantages of doing things that you have been familiar with are apparent. By doing such things, you could get no process. For example, if you are a student. You spend most of the time studying the subject that you are quite good at. The results could be that your energy and time is wasted while you have not improved your performance in other subjects that you are weak in. The efficiency of your studying would be criticized and you might lose your self-confidence eventually.

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