28号考，作文求拍

acai1118

不要给我面子，拍得越狠我越喜欢

这是看了最近的机经练的

政府应该把钱投入到艺术方面还是应该把钱投资在运动方面，比如国家奥林匹克队什么的。
                    

 

It is no easy job to suggest in which the government should invest. It is not wise to ignore any of them. I think every aspect of the society should have a balanced development. That could lead us into a harmonious life. So we ought to put the money in arts, sports as well.

 

After raising up the budget line in the arts area, the government can provide the various TV shows and an array of the performances activities to citizens. People therefore are able to relax themselves when they shut their office lights. They can’t wait to turn on the TV set after the whole day’s business,   and fill themselves with those astonishing comedies, MTV and other eyes-popping programs. On weekends, people would have the chance to invite their friends to the movie theatre together, due to the recently released blockbusters. It’s likely to provide more opportunities for people to communicate with each other. Putting money in the arts not only can make people relaxed, but also can guide them to learn some useful skills, such as drawing, singing, playing piano and so on. The government should gather around people who excel in a variety of occupations ,on one hand they have the deep understanding of the jobs , on the other hand, they could impulse the social development with their all-around capabilities.

 

Meanwhile, we need to focus on the sports. If the government gives the order to build a large number of gyms for locals, they will work out there pretty often, That means people would prevent themselves from the harmful diseases, and have a healthy lifestyle. I think everyone will be cheerful to find all the citizens stronger both mentally and physically than they were before. If the government invests money to the sports teams, they could add a lot of facilities for their own use,  that would benefit the teams` results. There is no doubt that people will be proud of the Olympic champions who are from their countries.

 

After the Discussion above, it is obviously crystal clear that which field the government donates the money in, arts or sports,  it will be extremely helpful for the whole society.  

 

 

xdw1986

楼主在语法上有很多错误，例如，加了很多冠词the，自己应该多注意

arcadia_hlyy

同感,不过挺喜欢楼主的段落格式,前段时间读了很多范文,发现很多5分的作文写的好随意啊,那些我们中国人写的,绝大部分都是在拼字数,sign

acai1118

谢谢 定冠词我还真没有留意过 一定改

alexwithibt

改了第一段. 看看吧.

It is no easy job to suggest in which the government should invest. It is not wise to ignore any of them. I think every aspect of the society should have a balanced development. That could lead us into a harmonious life. So we ought to put the money in arts, sports as well. (It is not easy for us common people to predict which part government plan budgets to focus on in a fiscal year, for example, arts or sports.  Because both of them are coherent with our daily lives and will affect our lives a great deal in the future, so important is it for us to prudently consider and balance between them when deciding which one will be strongly put more money. From my perspective, …………)

 

acai1118

谢谢 感觉上了不止一个档次

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