[套词] 自己写的一份套磁信模板，求各位大神有什么改正意见

目前研二学习优化的，数学系。准备仓促，实力不佳，不知道这么写合适与否，望牛人赐教……

title：About a possible opportunity to study on (optimization) or relatedfield.

Professor ___

I am XXX, an international applicant for a PhD at yourdepartment. After researching on the website, I get great interest in yourresearch about (…)

I am pursuing my master degree in （my university） in China, studying Operation Research, especially working on optimization problem whenthe object function is convex but not continuous.

Majoring in Information andComputing Science, I got my bachelor degree in XXX, too. Besides many basicmath courses about analysis and algebra, I also took many math courses whichare useful in compter science, such as computational geometry and matrixcomputations. Also I got familiar working with the frequently used computerlanguages like C++ and Matlab during that time. In the third grade, I took partin a project guided by a professor of game theory, studying Nash equilibrium.