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刚去搜了一下,摘自Manhattan论坛的解答: Sentence structure in all but E is flawed. ( because and since are secondary issue)
Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A. because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
After we remove fluff, the core is :
Prospecting for gold..........was ....easy task, because of x , y and z put gold literally within reach for anybody
We cant say because of x , y and z put.........hence wrong we need a reason and , only because can work,but not because of.
One more problem is reach for is unidiomatic.
B. because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
same problem
Prospecting for gold..........was ....easy task, because of x, y and z , and putting gold within reach of...........
Both these bold face make the sentece unidiomatic
C. owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
Prospecting for gold..........was ....easy task, owing to x, y and z , and putting gold within reach of...........flawed
D. since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
Prospecting for gold..........was ....easy task, since x , y and z, putting gold literally within reach for anybody..........sentence structure is just too bad........I mean there is no connection between parts.
E. since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
Prospecting for gold..........was ....easy task, since x , y and z put gold literally within reach of anybody........
Perfect .....smooth sentence structure, connecting parts appropriately the second part gives reason why prospecting for gold was easy |
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