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For many revisionist historians, Christopher Columbs has come to pensonify devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native people of the Western Hemisphere.
A) devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native peoples of the the Western Hemisphere
LEO>>devastation and enslavement 是复数,所以用that has错误。
B) devastation and enslavement in the name of progress by which native peoples of the Westrn Hemisphere have been decimated
LEO>>被动语态不简洁。(注意这里从句中也是用的复数谓语)
C) devastating and enslaving in the name of progress those native peoples of the Western Hemisphere that have been decimated
LEO>>优先使用名词形式,而非动名词形式。
LEO>>those没有指代对象。
LEO>>结构性错误,those native peoples不知道在主句中担任什么成分,也不能形成完整的从句。
D) devastating and enslaving those native peoples of the Western Hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated
LEO>>personify +名词,好过+动名词;
LEO>>which不能指代人,应改用who;
LEO>>in the name of progress修饰对象错误;
LEO>>被动语态不简洁。
E) the devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that have decimated the native peoples of the Western Hemisphere
LEO>>OA 主语the devastation and enslavement 被看作是复数。尽管一般来说the A and B视作单数,复数的表达形式是the A and the B,但这就是OA。 |
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