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Faulty voting equipment, confusing ballots,voter error, and problems at polling places have been cited by a new study ofthe 2000 United States presidential election, which estimated that they did notcount 4 million to 6 million of the 100 million votes cast.
A. Faulty voting equipment, confusing ballots, voter error, and problems at pollingplaces have been cited by a new study of the 2000 United States presidential election, which estimated that they did not count 4 million to 6 million of the100 million votes cast.
Leo》 which 指代错误,这里which指代了election,而实际上which应该指代a new study
B. Citing faulty voting equipment, confusing ballots, voter error, and problems atpolling places, a new study of the 2000 United States presidential electionhas estimated that 4 million to 6 million of the 100 million votes cast were not counted.
Leo》 correct
C. Citing faulty voting equipment, confusing ballots, voter error, and problems atpolling places, 4 million to 6 million of the 100 million votes cast were notcounted in the 2000 United States presidential election, a new study estimates.
Leo》句子主语是数字4M to 6M, 这个主语不能做独立现在分词结构citing的逻辑主语。
Leo》a new study estimates是句子结构,前面没有连词,run-on;
D. A new study has cited faulty voting equipment,confusing ballots, voter error, and problems at polling places in estimating that 4 million to 6 million of the 100 million votes that were cast had not been counted in the 2000 United States presidential election.
Leo》cite...in doing sth. 是wrong idiom;that were cast是wordy的结构,
E. A new study of the 2000 United States presidential election, citing faultyvoting equipment, confusing ballots, voter error, and problems at pollingplaces, has estimated 4 million to 6 million votes had not been counted of the100 million votes cast.
Leo》一连窜的现在分词独立结构的逻辑主语都是A new study,句意不对;citing,confusing,vote and problem结构不平行;宾语从句estimate后面缺少that(弱判定);of the 100M votes cast应该修饰4M to 6M votes这个主语,把谓语结构插在定语和其修饰的名词当中必然是错误的。 |
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