OG 13 SC 128 关于双that

purplehana · 发表于 2013-8-11 17:59:50

128. Australian embryologists have found evidence that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolving as a kind of snorkel.

(A) that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolving

(B) that has suggested the elephant descended from an aquatic animal, its trunk originally evolving

(C) suggesting that the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal with its trunk originally evolved

(D) to suggest that the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal and its trunk originally evolved

(E) to suggest that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal and that its trunk originally evolved

第一次发帖，问题很小白，见谅。

我的疑问是正确选项E，解释说平行所以有两个that，但是我做og一般情况下都会认为两个that比较wordy。坛子里我记得128也有人有疑问，但是我没有看懂什么意思。

看题的时候没看仔细所以选了D= =D里面明显错误是时态，但是E我一看到两个that我就觉得不是就没选= =那么两个that的情况下如果不平行就是wordy？我会认为suggest that the elephant is ... and (主语谓语...)这样就算平行了，我不会把that也考虑在里面。

求指导啊

板栗在奋斗 · 发表于 2013-8-11 18:18:17

这个= =好像并列中的that是不能省略的吧，要强调并列关系。

板栗在奋斗 · 发表于 2013-8-11 18:19:47

然后- -我认为你的说法是正确的，it is said that Xiaoming usually has his breakfast and then goes to school. 这样的句子应该没有问题~

板栗在奋斗 · 发表于 2013-8-11 18:20:52

板栗在奋斗发表于 2013-8-11 18:19
然后- -我认为你的说法是正确的，it is said that Xiaoming usually has his breakfast and then goes to s ...

呃= =and之后补上重复的主语，反而会显得累赘。注意并列的成分。

purplehana · 发表于 2013-8-11 18:58:20

板栗在奋斗发表于 2013-8-11 18:20
呃= =and之后补上重复的主语，反而会显得累赘。注意并列的成分。

谢谢解释~！！
那还是要看句子是否并列，为了强调并列，that不可以省略咯=v=

Joehe2010 · 发表于 2013-8-13 23:16:30

that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal and that its trunk originally evolved as a kind of snorkel
这两个没有先后次序的关系，所以应该平衡并列

purplehana · 发表于 2013-8-14 09:51:45

Joehe2010 发表于 2013-8-13 23:16
that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal and that its trunk originally evolved as a kin ...

0v0谢谢回答

4Hs · 发表于 2013-8-14 14:25:49

我觉得主要还是看句子意思，如果你不加that的话，说明后半句已经跳出suggest的范围了，就变成和Australian embryologists have found evidence ……这一层并列的了，在逻辑上不正确。

qiongle · 发表于 2013-8-14 16:35:46

and that和前面的suggest that 平行，怎么会不对呢？OG里面没有说过两个THAT平行式wordy啊，其次就算是wordy你也得选，正如你说的D里面有明显时态错误，这是致命的错误，而不是可选错误，当然是把致命错误排除，留下虽然可能是wordy的选项，当然E的平行也没有wordy，希望对你有用。

purplehana · 发表于 2013-8-17 15:52:20

4Hs 发表于 2013-8-14 14:25
我觉得主要还是看句子意思，如果你不加that的话，说明后半句已经跳出suggest的范围了，就变成和Australian ...

谢谢解答-v-

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