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Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

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发表于 2013-10-30 19:18:12 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

  • AOver the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
  • BOver the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
  • CWith charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
  • DThe replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
  • ECharcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
正确答案 A


B选项中的in addition to到底应该如何解释呢?当时觉得A里面的as a result of和because明显不平行,B选项虽然也不确定对不对,但当时的判断是觉得B的语义是对的。
除了several improvements之外,还有the replacement作为其原因~~
有人说tripling错误,但是记得OG还是prep里面有一道题用的就是doubling啊~~为神魔~~T-T求解答~谢谢!
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沙发
发表于 2013-11-1 12:25:22 | 只看该作者
B看似意思还可以,但是简洁性不佳。同样的逻辑意思,动词的表达最直接,名词比较靠后了,而且名词里动名词又比纯名词靠后。所以tripling,replacement,the melting of 处都有问题。

文法上也有细小的毛病。
以A取代B, replace A with B, 不用by。
作为燃料,as the fuel,不用for。
简单并列用and,不可用in addition to 。addition这个词意为额外的,外加的,使用时一定有一个基础。体会下面两个句子

We will soon have an addition in our family. 我们家很快要添丁了。(在现有family的基础上)

I got 100 dollars in addition to my salary. 在工资之外又额外赚到100刀。(my salary为基础)

换句话说,A in addition to B, B应该是A的基础,这种关系可能表现为B先于A发生、A由B派生出来等等。本题的两个原因之间不具备这种基础关系,所以不能用in addition to连接。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-1 14:21:36 | 只看该作者
laizi 发表于 2013-11-1 12:25
B看似意思还可以,但是简洁性不佳。同样的逻辑意思,动词的表达最直接,名词比较靠后了,而且名词里动名词 ...

谢谢!

解释得非常赞!还是语法第一,简洁靠后~~
in addition to 用的不恰当,因为文中没有明显的逻辑顺序说谁先谁后,或者谁是谁的基础。
两个都并列作为原因,之间并没有in addition的关系。

地板
发表于 2019-3-18 18:58:24 | 只看该作者
laizi 发表于 2013-11-1 12:25
B看似意思还可以,但是简洁性不佳。同样的逻辑意思,动词的表达最直接,名词比较靠后了,而且名词里动名词 ...

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