with后面是否可以接分词结构?

sarahfuzq · 发表于 2013-12-15 15:52:41

Unlike the body's inflammartory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.

正确选项是
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunbrun results

为什么原句不对呢？
with 后面什么时候可以接分词结构，什么时候不行？

谢谢

15801218581 · 发表于 2013-12-15 16:29:19

我觉得原句不好在于时态 is resulting in 。。没有必要用进行时嘛

而且in which表达的逻辑关系要比with好

with后面是否可以接分词结构?

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