3月19日机经作文练习一篇，求指导修改～～～～

zhangkeiris · 发表于 2016-3-11 21:32:22

topic：Do you agree or disagree with the parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake?

It is uuiversally acknowleged that parents will give their best parental love to their children. Whilest the more attention they put onto their children, the more sensitave their attitudes toward the behavior of their children. Some parents are afraid of any form of harm done on their children. They want to give their children the best protection they can. However, the wish is good but the reality is cruel.Mistakes as well as harmness are unavoidable in everyone's life. I believe that parents should let their children make mistaks and learn from their own mistake in some ways.
  For some mistakes that are not that principlely malicious, parents should let go of their children. Take me for example, I was naughty in my teenage years, I won't listen carefully in class and I was a headache of my teacher.She always called my father to school and seriously stated that I would not go to a college if I continue playing this way.My father didn't blame me but one day I got a very bad performance in pre-entrance exam. At the moment I realized that maybe I will never go to a college and maybe there will be no future to me at all, I was depressed and upset. My father noticed this and talked to me. He said the reason why he didn't punish me for my bad score was that he knew I would regret one day and I will be self-motivated as soon as I see clearly what lies ahead. He was right. I knew it is foolish not to study hard while in the student period. Lukily enough, I learnt a lesson.
  However, some mistakes are unneglectable and must be stopped at once. Like criminals, parents should never let it go natrually once they find the trend of juveneil criminals. These are mistakes that are severe and shall never be tolerent. There is no way for children to learn from these mistaks like steal or bullet. These are mistaks that should be prevented at the very beginning.
  To believe or not, we all make mistaks, we are mudane rather than saint.It is natrual for every child making mistakes, only if we help him realize and overcome the plight can our children become better men.

3月19日机经作文练习一篇，求指导修改～～～～

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