请教Manhattan 5th 中的一处its 指代.

Apolloemma · 发表于 2013-3-28 15:04:01

An incidence cannot logically exceed women. In the construction X exceed> Y, the subject X and the ob ject Y must be parallel. To fix the problem, you can repeat the noun incidence or use the pronoun that. In any case, you must repeat the preposition among

Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS the incidence among women.
Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS its incidence among women. (这里的its 指代什么？)
Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS that among women

这里的 its 是指代 the disease 吗？

victor198506 · 发表于 2013-3-28 22:37:44

对,the incidence of the disease=the disease's incidentce

fpd · 发表于 2013-3-28 23:08:14

对！同意楼上！

Apolloemma · 发表于 2013-3-29 08:35:13

嗯。谢谢两位对这个问题的解答。

coconutmi · 发表于 2013-9-2 22:10:56

Apolloemma 发表于 2013-3-29 08:35
嗯。谢谢两位对这个问题的解答。

其实我有点疑问,如果在sc里有这样的选项，会不会被认为是指代不清？

Apolloemma · 发表于 2013-9-3 07:11:26

coconutmi 发表于 2013-9-2 22:10
其实我有点疑问,如果在sc里有这样的选项，会不会被认为是指代不清？

应该不算

请教Manhattan 5th 中的一处its 指代.

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